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Venom needs a body to survive and his kind is always found to be looking for one.

Damn this was close. I felt like the multis kind of took away from what could have been solid punchlines from venomind. I've seen saaxx hit harder than this though and the set up and punches were more consistent. Fairs in 

Venom you look to kinda have "infinite syndrome" this is a rap battle actually setting up punchlines is more important than just rhyming complex words. cyphers are great for that 

Venom was on a cipher tip, Saxx brought a battle orientated piece. The fairs in for the battle piece. Keep at it, Venomind. Try reading other people’s battles to get a better understanding of what to put forth in a battle. 

I got this going to saxx.. He an overall better verse.. With a couple of good metaphors..

Venom needs to improve his style.. Insert some complex metaphors and a better rhyming scheme

Both of you incorporated a very mediocre set of vocabulary in your verses for started. Although my loser's was slightly more basic. He barely made any sort of attempt to even create some sort of punchline from what I've noticed. Some of his lines were just outright broken which also seriously impacted his odds here. He overall failed to carry out an principal a rap battler should in order to win.

The way Sax set up his lines was really sluggish as he failed to punctuate what he was metaphorically speaking and his breast implant bar was a huge ass stretch. His thoughts/thots wordplay was really cheesy and it didn't really make the line punch for me. All of his punches felt really forced in general and at certain parts of the verse it seemed like he was only trying to rhyme. He made a pretty good attempt at making multisyllable rhymes though at some parts.

I'm over the top, frickn UNDERMININ YOU.HOLDN the spot,you RUNNIN Out of lines to spew....got a Mind to use, ...I'm IN IT, WITHIN A SPIDERS WOMB.CATCN YOR WEB OFLies you use.. no matter the device's you choose . BATTLE? HOW YOUEven got time to lose...HANDS Down like 630 I got this in a win SECONDS BEFORE THE RHYMES you choose.Make alterations in your cardboard creations,,HARDWood abrasions, you catch, in the paint, tryna to SLAM on a TALL cat BLOCKN your DRIVE to make greatness.CENTER!!!! STAGE I Reincarnate BIG L LINES......Freestyle your end time.MEANWhile I'm well advised I WILL ,SMTH AND WESSON You're ILL VIBES INTO A DEMONIC BED TIME.My ascertation of your exasperation in lack of ass to elaborate on how you rap in rage is, COLLAPSE On pavement...GANG BANG..KURUPT can vouge for black and BLUE BLASTS DELEGATED. you can FEELNumb when a SHOCK wave ripples through your frame, you catchn dUE MASS eradication. Fuck what you have in a phrase dissn-engagement...IM FRONTLine spitting sicker than PLUNGER RAPE inna fragrance.....IM SITTN COMPLACENT.....CAUSE I KNOW THERE'S WAY YOU CAN FADE THIS...........

FV IN

This was a terrible battle from both sides honestly, but Venomind was totally lacking structure to make his verse legible (even though I could tell he had some ideas in there) whereas Saax had bad shit (ROUNDS bars? Really) but I could generally follow the progression of his material. Fair's in.