Bobby: ok... first off. Don’t force your lines, just cause it rhymes doesn’t mean it’s a hard hitting bar. Spend more time and energy focusing on the punchlines than the multis. Now, as for the wordplays... fam, wordplay has to work grammatically each way it is being said... so: War/Raw, firstly is NOT a wp, secondly it doesn’t work, either way. For/4, is a good wp, basic bit nonetheless a wp... though what is the 4 in reference to? You’re known for... breaking four teeth? What? REACH!! Again, soup-er, you eating a bowl of blended female body parts in a soup? How’s that super? What does soup-er have to do with a Mad Universe? The rest after this again, you were focused on your multis and had no actual punches nor coherent bars/lines. 

Not hating, trying to help you see the errors, otherwise you may continue to make these silly mistakes. Keep at it. 

Nine: you had the better structure, flow and coherent bars. Concepts where nice. Done enough to take the win, easily. However you need to start elaborating on your concepts more/going into/giving more detail and creating bigger and harder hitting punches from said concepts. 

Overall: not a ‘bad’ battle here, both have work to do, one more than the other. The fairs in, I’m out. 

SERVIN WIT STRAPS/ ur fat bitch fell for me... u must of HEARD HER COLLAPSE this 1 line won it for me

nice to bobby easing in with the multis, very nice !! the wordplays were a little forced but that will come along as your multis did eventually coz i know how much work you put in to your stuff man stay at it alos just for the record, if you battled bnas now you did snipe him instead lol. as for this battle though 978 had the better punchlines which got him this one esp the heard her collapse and peddling hard lines, something i sure bobby can look at an incorporate it into his bars in his later verses too. 978 your opener and closer needed work the closer was cypher-ish and the opener made no sense and if it needs expos best believe it needs a more relative set up instead just my two cents of what would come in handy for you when u battle in tourneys. good battle this one otherwise.

a low 6 and a high 6 here.

battle has ended but i'm still gonna drop in my feeds for bobby.