Nice bro GL

thx u too, this was a make up response to ur 16 before Justo took it last week lol

This was a pretty dope battle guys. Too bad it got slept on. I got my winner wit the harder punches. But he needs to work on more relevant set ups. My loser had some nice shit but just wasn't enough for me. 

Fair vote!

Dyno, this reminds me a lot of my early drops. You can see that you're struggling a little bit with some of the multis cause they get a bit nonsensical at times or the words thrown in are kind of forced there. Try and keep it as absolutely simple as possible. If you are spending a couple of minutes trying to think of rhymes for a scheme, use a different scheme. Let the rhyming come fluid and then you can start to work on other aspects.

Uni, I have no idea what your gameplan is with your capitalization. You're only supposed to cap the parts that rhyme. In HOES HORIZONTALLY and BOMB ATOMICLY, how do hoes and bomb rhyme with anything? Also, you need to make sure your multis have the same number of syllables in each when they do rhyme. Here and there you had little ideas of punches but aren't setting them up properly yet. 

This will be really close as it's basically Dyno's ability to at least understanding rhyming more, against Uni's slightly better punchline ideas. I think I'm going to slightly edge Uni because I think even with essentially one word rhyming, it was a bit more enjoyable to go through.

The more coherent/thought out concepts took the win here. Keep grinding both of you. The fair is in, gents. 

Both have improvements to make.