Good battle man, Thanks for the UU Send 8 if you got something #Legit

ya no problem man good stuff bro, ill definitley se d u a 8 i dont know wen but ill make happen

Went with Legit on this...a lot more consistent with the punches and setups, some creative concepts that could have been better executed, but over all a dope drop...Dyno, some of your multis were slanted, and didn't really make for a solid build in your schemes, although you were working with some pretty difficult rhymes...your setups took the intensity away from your punches. I've read better verses from you. Overall, dope spar gentlemen!

Fairs in 👍

i sent u a 8 about a week ago 

IAmLegit the relationships between your ideas, while relevant is pretty minimal. And that subsequently detracts from them. Also, the excessive use of unnecessary symbols detracts from readability. Especially since they're unimportant to the verse in large part. And while there were some slight attempts at things like wordplay, it fell flat to me, because it was capitalized on in a strong enough way to present a double meaning. Dynoswordz, the suit yaself bar was the highlight of your verse, and presents a prime example of the types of flips I've remarked on in previous votes. However, one line doesn't make a verse, and I'd like to see ideas like this more frequently throughout.