Like we put him on Santa's naughty list

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IamTheNme: This is better than the last one i read from you. More focused on battling that just rapping. You need to either edit or try a different scheme/structure with your multis. Not working, fam. Nonetheless, good concepts. You've just fallen into a "rhyme trap" and seeme to be more focused on rhyming than actually telling the story or putting forth the image/vision you're trying to convey. You'll snap out of it soon, i'm sure. King: Opener is dope, think i've seen it before somewhere but i cannot say for certain... just kinda rings a bell. Either way, nice way to start your piece off. Ok, now after reading the rest of your piece... i do find it some what suspect. Not proof at moment, so i'll move on. The weather reporter line was meh at best. The wp on 4 didn't work with anything there. Same with the whole waist, waste. From here on out your wording started to suffer greatly which hindered each line. Ending bar/punchline wasn't strong. Outcome: both have work to do. One more than the other. Keep at it, gents. Fairs in, i'm out. 

Great feedback.. But who did you vote for.. 

And I feel you. Half this shit I see up here I swear seen already. But I aint bite xhit. 

oh.. when I said heavy weight around the waste.. I meant like trash artist.. Or like chubby around the hips.. I dunno 

Pretty close battle. Nme's was a little bit more enjoyable to read, but VA seemed to be a little bit more seasoned so he set up his punches and delivered them with a bit more impact so I lean that way.

Pretty dope battle here, I have King taking this... although, I've read much better from you both...pretty solid punches and setups from both...but felt Kings wording and multis lined up a bit better here. Nme the 'slime ball/octopus' bit was pretty funny.

BOTB: Ehh.. TEXTERS GET SLAUGHTERED so he'll get penned in the ring like WRESTLING AUTHORS.. He's hanging on a limb and he'll break with four cast like WEATHER REPORTERS

FAIRS IN GENTLEMEN 👍

King bit this home for me. Thet punches linfered aftef reading them. Honestly name you coulda won this but I feel like one or two of the punches were just written to fill bars.