Got IAm winning this with more punches and higher quality punches here. Multis were iffy in places but overall you had the better read. Lost reef diver was your best one. Kinda disappointed in nero's verse here. I'm assuming you're getting rid of some rust, but your only halfway decent line was your closer, plus you took like 5 lines to get to your first punch in an 8 liner and it wasn't very good. You're better than that.

Good battle N E R O 

IAmLegit: You've got nice concepts. Your pieces are worded well (no idea how many get away with shitty wording). Only downside to your piece here is that you're keeping your concepts as 'one liners'. I'd like to see each of them made into bars themselves, as it is, they're only jabs that's thrown due to them being one liners that have little to nothing to do with the following line(s). Entire piece flows smoothly too. n e r o: Your opening bar had some issues. Firstly, wording is kinda all over the place. Pasttense to pretense in the same line and bar. Also, in an 8, it's a bit risky to use tha main portion of the 8 for one punch... the bigger built up punches are better used in a 16, 32 or 64. In 8's you want more punches in the box, plus the entire bar itself wasn't really that strong so evidentily you just wasted 6 lines of space in your piece with a punch that has terrible wording in it's exectution. "pigs won't expose me for drastic crime"... for a, for drastic crimes.. Overall: You've some work to do, man. Need to sort that wording out, don't force or squeeze multis together cause they rhyme, focus on the actual wording of each sentence and read them out loud before posting... be sure that you're not sacrificing readibility, flow, punctuation, grammar and all the other basic fundementals of writing. 

Outcome: I feel IAmLegit takes the win here with better writing in general. Both have work to do, keep at it, gents. Fairs in.