multis, disses, structure, filling the box, set ups, and flow. Bnas was ahead on every aspect here without bringing his best game which should give you a faint idea on what you should work on fo a better showing next time lil suth. also your opener and closer was too gay to work in a battle man.

Easy win no expo needed at all a box needs to be filled before anything to avoid automatic defeat... Bnas knew his opponent and handled it easily 

easy snipe for the battle. both could have done alot better, but as for my loser here. He should take a look a skizzo rap bible and try to enhance his style.

Lil Suth didn’t fill out all the space he could’ve used, where as Bnas did. Lil Suth only had 1 use of a multi, which were 2 words and 2 syllables per multi in the scheme ; Bnas had 3 Schemes, his 1st was 3 syllables per multi, 2nd scheme was 2 syllables per multi, and the last scheme was 3 syllables per multi. Neither technically had a broken multi, because in Lil Suth’s case it was because he only had 1 scheme with 2 multi’s, and in Bnas’ case, it was because some/most of the words in his schemes were half rhymes.

Lil Suth had extreme formatting errors, from not filling the box, not using proper grammar, and most importantly not having clarity or an expo. Bnas filled the box, used proper grammar, but did have some clarity issues towards the end, specifically the end of his 2nd scheme and the entirety of his 3rd scheme. Expo’s must be left if references or obscure slang is used, especially when attempting wordplay.

Lil Suth didn’t have any punchlines, and had 3 legible attempts at a diss, 1 use of self hype and 4 uses of gibberish. Bnas had 1 legible punchline, 1 illegible punchline, and a slew of disses.

Neither had any uses of strong wordplay, though Bnas had a good Usenet of metaphors in his matrix punchline.

Lil Suth has a score of 1, for presenting a “straight outta middle school” type verse, with seemingly no knowledge of Multis, Punchlines, Formatting, or anything regarding rap battles.

Bnas has a score of 3, for presenting a verse that was mostly formatted properly, had decent multi’s, had 1 punchline, a few disses, but also has a clarity issue, severely decreasing the score.