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kicks are also precussive beat effects/intsruments

Hardball is one of the most ordinary of all the GI JOEs

his name is Joe so i compared him to GI JOE action figure

rest is simple.

Avrgejoe, the biggest advice I can give you, at this time, would be to sit down and think about your bars before writing them down. As opposed to what seems like writing down the first thing that comes to mind. Text battling is a written format, and not a freestyle medium. Writing this way will not benefit you. Additionally, I would suggest reading some of the better battlers' material, or watch some live battles to familiarize yourself more so with the format of the genre. Saaxxx, to me, the language barrier is a big issue in regard to your rhyming. To the point, that some of your lines seem very hard to find any rhyming in, because of how differently I would say them phonetically. And example of this would be "you tryna act all," and "could mean a hard ball" To me, the only real rhyming aspects here are ball/all. And to a much, much lesser extent could/you. That said, it's obvious that you have a stronger understanding of the basic fundamentals than your opponent, at least in regard to this particular battle. I would prefer to see more flips that are complex, but cohesive. Using turns of phrases, wordplay in your setups, etc. 

Okay this was in a way one sided, I mean no disrespect but saxxx destroyed the other guy it could land any other way. It's metaphor, decent flow ,wordplay and punchline against regular diss . Come on man you need to step up if you want to stand a chance here. Nice attempt but you clearly lost here +1 Saxxxbaba

One came with some above average wordplay while the other attempted just that but came up quiet a bit short yo. All in all salute to both for trying but I've got my winner