A solid verse from Squammy took this, hopefully this is the start of a comeback cos your bars were always nice.

Cyber well done on filling the box and having a good structure to your verse. My advice is firstly to always try to rhyme at the end of each line (you can rhyme in the middle/start too if you want to, but the end rhyme must be there). Secondly, focus really hard on making sure all of your rhyming multies match up. "on it/John Wick" was a good example of when you did this well, although you should try for 3-4 syllable rhymes instead of 2. "loosely defined/crucified" is an example of where they didn't match, "loosely defined" has 4 syllables whereas "crucified" has 3.

Squammy this was a fun verse with a lot of rhyming. It felt a little rushed, which I understand. I thought your Pirate Bay line was one of your best, the climate change one wasn't really a punch at all and would have hurt you in a top-level bout but I did think it flowed well with the scheme and it made me chuckle. Overall a good verse that has me excited for the return (again) of Squammy.

SQUAMMY

First emcee had some really interesting lyricism metaphorically speaking. He also had a pretty solids means of formatting the verse. However, his multi-syllable game was rather satisfactory. I also noticed zero punchlines from his verse therefore making the overall verse not hit as hard as the responder's.

Squammy set up his bars in ways that were much more appropriate for battle rap. Superior wordplay to prep his punches that connected greatly and hit his opponent fairly hard. The punches made a lot more sense & they were also backed up with better multi's. If anything else I felt like his closer was rather forced out but still his overall verse was a lot better than Cyber's. 

pretty straight forward here one felt like he was freestyling and cyphering without any rhymes while the other was ahead on every category and gets this for displaying the better grip on basics.

One got this w a better understanding of the basics. Better set ups to harder hits, nothing too strong but enough for the win.