lol how does this have only zero votes lol 

this is free credit shit right here !!!

osho you gotta diss your opponents more man instead of rhyming about random observations which make ur lines go off track too much. King ur opener had me LMAOin but the doormat bit is way too played to have any impact other than on snipes liked the flashing lights play but you do still have a few desired from the wording to your set ups which would be nice to see worked on coz that really hold your ideas back from surfacing to their full potential this will esp get highlighted when u battle stronger opponents like in ur battle with GTR too, the closer tho was again a very played out concept which would have no major impact unless you link it to a factually verfiable personal aspect of your opponent. decent verse overall given the competition anyway. Osho i hope you get better man.

One showed up and ate here while the other showed up but didn't do a whole hell of a lot. Dudes who don't take this site seriously should start getting banned yo the lack of activity is getting boring no doubt

DEDSEC

osh- really lost on ur verse don't know what u we're aiming for but deff wasn't ur opponent.

King- threw punches .. not too strong but enough for the win. Never seen a 10 pack of soda by the way.. it's 12 or 24 round here cuhhz

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found ten.. Fountain... Like soft drink fountains

thanks saxxx.. Best feedback I see