Throwaway bars 

Word.

Fv no h8 

jute box ur structure did you in here which is not really filling up the box as is the norm here hence the auto loss but overall ur verse was not bad at all just a lil more flips with metaphors and wordplays and you should be just fine same for budda too but then you already said they were throwaway bars so thats fine hope to see you guys battle again sometime!

I'm hearing that about filling up the box but that's just a hideous paragraph. That's not how bars of poetry are structured, but I'm old chool. In my opinon Slim Budda shit's barely rhymed with almost no compound syllable rhymes/multies. His only subject matter was gun play with no metaphors. I at least had 2-3 wordplay/metaphors, rhymed coumpound syllables consistently. I structured my bars in such a was that they flowed - which earned me an automatic loss? I don't remember filling up the box being on the criteria. I recall wordplay, flow, rhyme, muli's, and punches. In 4 bars, not a paragraph. 

Just fill up the box.. It's not hard .

Jute had more interesting lines. Even though it wasn't as much I still liked his more. 

Slim had a good concept of multies he must've underestimated him because his punches was lacking..