HE ACTUALLY FUCKIN WROTE SHIT

I will battle you again Tyrone70

I give you the beef.you look like pee.

This a funny ass battle man but Willium your bars are inexcusably bad my g and I sincerely hope you weren’t serious lmao. 

Positives - 

there were a few hints of metaphors here and there in both you verses

both verses were pretty much on par almost throughout 

Negatives - 

both verses were mostly on par coz they had the same shorcomings and flaws

all of you meatphors were under utilized and half assed 

both of you have been here long enough to have better rhymes than that

nobody had proper multis.

both had very basic rhyming

both lacked most essentials required in text battles here

overall i am leaning with willium here coz he kept all his lines intact with end rhymes while tyrone seemed like he lost his rhyming between the start flapping and raps are shit lines coz there were absolutley no end rhymes there. 

Weak multies, punches, etc. by both parties. WilliumBro was slightly more coherent. 

I would agree this is not my best battle, I definitely could have improved on metaphors, and punchlines 

This is a hard one to call. Both are even here in every categorie of battling. Feel both were more on the cipher tip than battling per se, nonetheless, leaning this way due to a more 'aggresive' approach with his piece. Fairs in, I'm out. 

both really need improving. I think you guys should focus more on set ups and creating a punch. Its painfull to read stuff like this lol