evenly matched spar here. I thought the punchlines and Multis could have been harder on both sides

my winner was able to keep their verse together and they did have a creative approach to their flow.

the loser had a lot more forced moments than my winner did and sometimes it was hard to follow where they were going.

gg 

Magnum: Not bad, a lot of work to be done still. Try fixing your multi sets and/or avoid as best you can having words in between your multi sets that don't go with the next set in that multi scheme, kills flow and readability. Concept wise, not bad... just need some work executing your concepts further. Keep at it. Sax: You too have an issue with your multi sets, not so much as your oppenet but nonetheless one is still there. You executed your concepts better than your opponent though you used up some space with lines of filler, try avoid that... just cause it rhymes doesn't mean it's always needed. Ask yourself: does this line add to the overal impact of the punch? If it's a no, rewrite it, replace it or remove it altogether. Need to throw as many punches as you can, especially in an 8. 

Fairs in, i'm out. 

SexBaBa took this one for me as his hyper extensions flexed the upper case of the broadband Wifi Gigabyte which elevated the tone of the battle...so yehhh