my mans probably still wearing a pair of sketchers shoes

^ very nice. if it was the lose aspect you were referring to set up could have been way better but a good attempt. you pretty much lost all steam after that line though.

Dope by you already know whats wrong with your structure. this time content wise your verse was a let down too, esp coz of all those fillers man!!

imma give this to lenn coz she seemed like shed dissed more than dope is all.

Pretty close, not very eventful. In the end lenn was a bit more coherent with the flow.

One was funnier here no doubt but my winner had them little jabs yO