Bobby -

+ Your multis are matched up syllable wise now

+ the wordplay attempts esp the robin one was nice

+ you used in rhymes as well which was nice when reading

+ the rhyme build in the closer was nice

+ i am pretty sure Bnas cnt defeat you now lol so please dnt battle him again

- your wordplays at this point work as similies only but do not translate to a punch

- your multis need to be a little bit more relevant and to a length which feels more comfortable to you coz it kinda reflects on the reader like how i could tell you were really more comfortable with the closer these are abstract shit which you will eventually understand.

- a lot of your bars were legit rhymes wise but not punch wise

- you need to incorporate set ups and metaphors into ur lines which should be you next step here on

Coldburn -

+ i like how you stuck with a syllable count which felt more natural or convenient to you

+ it was nice to see you trying to put in wordplays into your verse

- on a general standard level 4 syllable multis are the best place to be in texts your's were far from it

- you had almost all of the cons booby had so you gotta read back on the -feeds i gave him too

overall - multis and basics point of view i think bobby got this imo.

Thanks for the feedback saxxx! 

Bobby youve stepped your shit up there's no denying that. Other dude was alright but he didn't set the same tone that Bobby did

Bobby for the win with the more creative effort applied to his piece. ColdBurn, not bad, more the freestyle-audio type vibe. Keep at it. Fairs in, i'm out. 

Winner: Great ideas and creativity, although some use of multis really didn't cut it for me...as I was still able to follow your points, but more attention should be given to structure. Opponent: Had better structure, but somewhat fell short in the creativity department...had a lot of steam in the beginning, but near the end it became a little diluted. Overall: nice drops from both. Fairs in 👍