recording monks was tight, on technical terms you could have added a little more specifics to it tho. nonetheless the BOTB

Wise i like where you trying to go with ur verses even tho ur not there yet. the escape plan angle lacked proper set up and punch/flip too. try working on keeping those tights and also trying to incorporate atleast 3-4 syllable multis in ur verses.

King I've seen better from u but still enough to clinch this battle...... .wise words try make your rhyme scheme abit more complex and fill the box this site prefers the American style... While slightly not Understanding the British style aka grime or UK hiphop which is different to grime.... It doesn't read well wrote down alot so u have to learn to adhere to certain styles of rapping although battling is battling... Good luck in your next battle