Good battle... I didn't really punch very much in my own opinion but I didn't wanna leave you hanging on the response 

GGs SQUAMMY

Btw I see you took inspiration from the Madeleine McCann bar in my last battle lol ;) Thanks for responding tho

SQUAMMY

I'm up for a rematch when you are SQUAMMY I feel I let myself down with this one. To be honest... Good battle tho and thanks for choosing me to battle. Respect 

Think squammy just about edged this, nme did well though, liked your rabbit in a hat line but maybe it could have been incorporated more

Squammy started strong but had a weaker finish, whip after whip loads of cars? Trash lmao but the start was string enough to secure the W, only just

Jesus Christ... One really missed the mark here.

One is improving, I see a nice structure developing.  However I felt some of the bars were satisfactory,  instead of well thought ideas. Execution was on point for the most part. The one thing that stuck out like soar thumb was the "I “attractor (a tractor)”, cause I “OWN A FARM”..." 

I see where you were going with this, it's just that it doesn't work when read both ways. Not hating but it actually it doesn't work either way, tbh. Saying "I attractor" coz I OWN A FARM, doesn't make any sense, and read like "I a tractor" doesn't work either,  youd have to "I'm" for it be correct, wo other than that slip up, not a bad verse. 

Loser didnt bring enough to the table here, and despite him using a bad wordplay, he takes this easily. With better use of conceptual ideas and  executing them a tad cleaner.fairs in