Both need a total revamp in their styles to become more complex, but I think Ace's execution was a bit above Tyrone's. Neither had any concepts (punches with double meanings) worth mentioning here. Fair's in.

I dunno.. He rhymed more.. My vote Tyrone

ace u got better bars then this!!

a dirk is a long dagger

chum is this shark bait made up of fish fisherman use

bootlegger someone who passes drugs ilegally 

screaming funny: moaning

Just for the clarification

this is an autowin, but since i am voting for u guys for the first time imma elaborate.

Tyrone - you capped random words, dnt do that unless they multis, readers here are used to a certain structure which is the best fit for text battles in these formats read a few and adapt. 

Ace had almost next to zero rhymes which made it very difficult for me to give his verse any kinda standing or validity as a battle verse.

overall these were really very very basic elements which both of u either lacked or had less of and there are tonners of others which were absent in this battle and u guys can begin by looking at the voting criterias and understanding what the other expected requirements are and then reading a few better battles to get a grasp on a few more basics so that ur aware of the amount of work you need to put into a battle verse before writing your next ones.

best of luck to both for their future endeavours.

i am surprised with the voting here tho

Both have a lot of work to do here to elevate. First and foremost is working on the basics. And those things are the very aspects you've selected(at least in part), in the categories here. For example, the use of multisyllabic rhyme schemes. While there was some very, very minute understanding of this aspect, it was something that could sharpened greatly, by using more complex, and longer form syllabic schemes. The next being metaphors and punchlines. While there was a degree of an attempt at humor from both of you, punchlines in battle rap are often a bit varied from that of a typical comedian, or from the perspective of a joke. In that they're set up through the use of some of these selected categories, and hinge on others as their basis conceptually. The use of wordplay primarily being used to form the set up to your punchline, which is often in the form of a metaphor. Which was something that was heavily used here. At least in those formats. I think my winner was aided simply by the fact that he went second, and literally nothing else. As this allowed some semblance of a flip to their opponent's verse.

Niether was really out the box or to creative imo but still 1 edges this one...

Tyrone: Did ok with cappin' his rhymes but used basic rhymes, but since ur new my voting wont be baded off that, but try to use multis in ur barz as well as at least 2 syllables in there bud...

Ace: Started of ok for a newbie with some decent concepts in there but after half way thru just stopped rhyming, and I suggest the same tobu as Ty, use multis and at least 2 syllables, can bring u more votes,  as well as try to make ur barz stand out, the voter wants to be surprised by what y'all say, make us go "damn" ya know...

Either way, GL both, 

Ni H8, FV in

Just realized I voted for wrong dude, as ya can tell by the rateing for each and the one I accidentally picked

Tryone did pretty fuckin' good here, no offense to Ace

THIS SHOULDVE BEEN 4-4, if it wasnt for...