This one was pretty tough to judge. savagesocietygunna, Most people usually only capitalize the end rhymes, so when readers come across a capitalized phrase, they are expected to rhyme was something else. You seem to have capitalized some things just for emphasis, which I would advise against next time. Some of your lines were a bit cypherish, Meaning they seem more focused on talking about yourself and how dope you are as opposed to dissing your opponent directly.You should also look into incorporating more complexity (wordplay, metaphors) into your punches. KaJe, All of your rhymes were one syllable rhymes with the exception of education and vacation.In a text battle format, it comes across as simplistic. Even in audio, it will be simplistic without impeccable timing and at least some internal one syllable rhymes within each bar.Try to incorporate more multi-syllables. One thing I'll give you is you went after your opponent more directly than he came after you, but the punches were pretty weak if I am to be honest.Keep elevating and working on your craft is all I can say. Seek advice if you want to get better at battling. This is almost a tossup, but I'll give the edge to savagesocietygunna. Fairs.

Close battle.. Gonna more technical