I'm new here so I'm not to familiar how yall exactly base yalls votes, so feel free to judge accordingly

And when I said he said "HE NITES BOMBS" its cause I'm assuming he meant to say "detonate" but instead he said "denotate" which means "to note"

We do fill the boxes completely and the way you had your entry Concealed is the way most of everybody on here does their stuff so you're good. How I see it, Ajex, fill your box, capitalize your rhymes and try to match yor syllables so you get a flow going. Also, dont use childish or overplayed punches like "Your mom" jokes otherwise thats exactly how their going to be seen. As jokes. You'll get there with practice, just observe others and work on it you'll get there

Concealed, I really liked the wordplay and the multies. Respect for not taking the easy win by filling the box and keeping it fair. Flow could use some work but its not bad. Nobody is perfect keep at it.

Overall Ajex just get your entries structured and work on the necesseties like hard hitting punches and a good flow and you'll do good and Concealed, fine tune your flow and try for more advanced multies if you can. Like more than one or two syllable a word multies and you're golden. Good battle all around 

RETROOOOO!!! Good Shit, cealed

Both need to fill the box (especially Ajex) in future battles. Concealed wins this pretty clearly with stronger punches and a more "correctly" formatted verse. Fair's in.

Easy win but some of that didn't make sense

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