This battle is for the PYW Season 3 - Week 4

Expos - 

Optometrist is an eye doctor

Nero was a popular CD burner program

Discord also means lack of harmony

rest is simple i guess .

EoA

this is interesting...

I wanna see the votes on this..

EOA

My fair is in fellas one was more smoother with the better multies and punches 

k

pretty sure me and guts were better than 4&5 somebody ban hallow from voting man :|

tough for me to make this decision because I do think guts in general has very good writing but in this case I think u went too far with certain ideas and it hurt u in the end. the La Mort Marat line doesnt work for me because it doesnt feel like a true multi. the boston tea party line was better but it didnt work for me because jumping on a ship versus jumping on a whip is just too much of a stretch conceptually. your closer to me also makes me scratch my head because I know theres phantom limb syndrome but.. a phantom erection? lol? it didnt rhyme with anything before it so it makes me feel like you couldve come up with any bar to close it but you chose that and to me it just wasnt hitting.

saxx youve actually seemed to take a point I made about your writing before and took a chance to improve upon it which led to the bars otb I felt won this for you. how you set up the multis for the compact disk line was perfect he "spawns sad shit/songs wack bitch/compact disc" all conceptually went together and worked to make a relevant diss, where I felt guts was a bit too general. your opener was a good punch but still some problems with the multis because your setup rhymes dont really work with "optometrist" but the punch worked. the rest of it was a bit too topical and at the same time all over the place, still those two bars I mentioned I feel are strong enough to give u the vote.

ultimately I'll say nero as always had a well structuted, cleanly formatted verse, but this time I just didnt think there was a punchline in there that made me feel you got at your opponent effectively

fv is in