xzander it might be an accent thing but a lot of your multis to me really werent rhyming to me unless i stretched the pronunciation really far so it was hard for me to give the vote to ya this time. your closing bar was nice but the rest of your material to me was kinda lacking maybe do to the multis being off also nobody has ever said "premature masturbation" thats not a thing, the phrase would be premature ejaculation

reptile something u gotta work on in my opinion is your setups because some of your multis are just really badly forced saying "BANDAI RAPIDLY YA MEAN?" sounds like random words u jumbled together ridiculously. and when its the first line of ur verse u just turned off a lot of readers before we even get to the content. also from what Ive heard its bad etiquette to try and rebuttal someones open verse but I like rebuttals when theyre done well, however yours really wasnt. the reason rebuttals dont work very well like they used to is because ur taking up space where u couldve just shown us ur own writing but instead ur kinda just taking ur opponents idea and running with it which can actually be easier than trying to come up with ur own fire bar. also the little "lol" when there wasnt even really a joke there was a bit cringe (lol). however your last two bars were actually dope minus the fact you had a setup where you said "the FULLY CANNON TUCKED" like bro thats not how one englishes ffs

fair vote in

Expo: BANDAI is an old toy brand, pronounced Ban-die...hence, 'drums'. 

Decent battle here. Winner was a bit more direct here and it helped edge him out for the win. Both rhymed well enough, some decent syllable counts in the schemes on this battle. Just felt my winner had an edge with his punchlines. Both had decent lines but my winner was more insult oriented. Loser wasted a couple lines with some self hype. A good example of this is his 2nd line. When comparing both styles of writing seen here, my winner had more complexity with his setups whereas my loser had a more quickfire style. Good battle either way. Fair vote, fellas.