Bored bars let's see how this goes

I wasn’t any more entertaining.

Winner should have filled the box but I felt he took this for attempting to be more complex. His multis were ok, mostly. Your punches had more sting to them imo. You should work on developing your concepts into better flips, e.g. using idioms or wordplay to make your punches land with more strength. And I didn't know wtf you were tryna do in the closer.

Loser was too basic. Got better as the verse progressed but it wasn't enough, execution wasn't good. Try being more creative by using ideas that are more fresh. Here you weren't really setting up your punches, it was more of a statement after statement kinda verse imo. Read some more battles and see how peeps like Edge and Lock write their bars, it'll help a lot.

I thought colosal verse was structured better in my opinion which gave it the easier ready feel. Fv is in check in on this side.

The winner took it with set-ups and small punches. Clean it up with better build-ups. Loser just kinda flowed--needs those punches