Easy win here. Lil money you should focus making your verse longer and try to learn setups to your punches. Letsbeef has a section for wordplay, punchlines etc....Lil talent. My favorite line was the train drivers union. that was clean. FV

Lil you went easy here with throwaway bars but since u asked for feeds on discord i am going thru with it lol - 

Bar 1 - 

Krossfaded kicking him hard would make him do a back flip generally so saying he would do a backflip without a valid set up suggesting how you gon do that makes ur intended punch a reach along with fillerish coz of the lack of more material and this is pretty much the feed for the whole of ur verse so imma refrain from giving u bar by bar breakdowns after this point.

LT - that bar would have hit more in the early 200ss coz that how old they concept is bro

Bar 2 - LT - -POPPER COMPILATION VIDS< this is something women would know more i mean the concept is nice and all but lacks the mass appeal amongst ur audience gotta centre the concept around something which will be easy for the readers to relate with else it's gonna be lackluster even if technically resonable. how many guys do you think have seen pimple popping videos here? lol other than a few pansies like ginge tho.

Bar 3 - i dnt think i understood this one

Bar 4  - fresh concept, not really a strong concept but well executed and the BOTB imo

Kroofaded go check out some top tier battles to see how to write verses LT with easy snipe here that opener was funny ASF like train drivers bar also

Ez won here