PYW!! season 3 week 3 let's get it

Expo my shit is pretty self explanatory good shit Griffey respect fams

Both were nice and not bad..the flow from both opponents were pretty good...for me as usual...with everything included...its comes down to the punches for me...and I do feel like wastes took this one by a lily bit...both were creative with the lines...east jus came a bit harder

Eastes you had some basic punch concepts but really lacked any structure and there were plenty of parts that didn't rhyme. Which is odd to read because that's usually the easier part. 

Sean had some basic punches too, much better structure and rhyming. Although the tossed up multie seemed a little forced. 

Sean takes this with a better verse overall imo. 

My winner took this with an overall more domainant verse, pulverizing his opponent with strong punchlines and controlling the  battle from start to finish in a sense of effortless fashion. My loser of this battle had some fair ideas, but was far behind in terms of deleivery, concepts and punchline power to name a few. Very one sided battle here, but it was worth the veiw, fairs cast!

stop wastin my time, bird ass nigga, im leavin polly slapped next you aint hard fam, I can tell by his "Lines-Hes-Lyin" Like a POLYGRAPH TEST

this punch cuold have been set up better to sting more coz polygraphy and shit determines the personality of an individual too, either way this concept is kinda played out too but where is the rest of the bar tho? :O 0/5

I'll "Blaze-Griffey" Call Me The Californian WILD FIRES! I'll lay you to sleep as The "Undertaker" With a "Tombstone" PILE DRIVER!

i am not sure i got this bar.

See me Im an elitest, but your wack as fuck wit the "Average-Shit" I'll Leave Griffey fucked, like a CELEBRITY REHAB ESABLISHMENT!

i am pretty sure this line was the intended continuation of ur opening line but got fucked up while copy pasting ur verses here lol thats kinda undoes all the good abt this and the first line man.you should proof read ur verse before posting man.0/5

Your embracing the mega right to left have you "Waggin- So-Fast" you’d think of it as RACING WITH JETTAS So a couple of punches’ll have “Griffeys-Portions-In- Pieces” like ENGAGING VENDETTAS!!

jettas seemed reaching, portions in pieces is 1.incorrectly worded and 2. a reach as well, i am not sure if u going for a wordplay here or just dissing. 2/5

either way imma only vote after expos for ur verse.also there was way too much of distance between every multi for the read to be lucid as a text battle man.

East is "tryna box with me??" take your "MITTENS, AND MOVE ASIDE" and "for all of that bar talk, he's getting touched up" like a "WITNESS IN CUBA'S FIGHT"

i get the concept, felt a little random in the sense it did not hit eastes since u mentioned east in the set up it kinda left nameplay desire, ok bar tho. 2.5/5

-beating accusations for you? is tough "after Grief took you out" like VICTIMS OF SUICIDE!!!! he's WASHED, STUCK, WITH LITTLE HOPE, but he's getting "thrown around for sport" and TOSSED UP, AND FLIPPIN' SLOW (cheerleading) b/c "I'm too filthy to catch in a clip" like RAW CUTS FROM BIGELOW!!

liked the grief bit, rest seemed overly fancy a little lol 3/5

I'm the type to EMPTY SHOTS IN THIS CHUMP'S HEAD, leave em murdered and SENT IN BOXES AND SUNSETS showing that "kid'll always be at the bottom" like we're "seLECTING SPOTS IN A BUNK-BED!!!"

good closer 3/5

Close one here. Good creativity from both. I think Griffey got it with a bit cleaner of a drop here. Easts rhymes seemed to be a bit out of place and wording was a bit shoddy on some of the punches. Felt Sean was just cleaner top to bottom and was either tied or ahead in terms of punch creativity so he got it for me. 

Saiyan, you took this one for having the harder punches. Opener was well executed and was botb for me. Closer was ok, the kid flips was nice but you didn't really stay relevant in the bar. Overall your execution was good and your punches had sting to them. Also your ideas were better than your opponents so you get more points for being more creative, good shit metal man.

Loser's execution wasn't good imo. It was ok, but not enough. E.g the opener is quite played with the whole 'polygraph' shit. Also the celebrity rehab line also made me sick lol, how you gonne set that up with 'average shit' when you have so much to go with there? Lmao. You were more basic than Saiyan and also didn't really set your punches up well, which cost you this one.

Good luck to the winner. 

Good battle fam...East i think people won't catch ya rhymes as forgot to cap ya multi's in some places Sean has some good punches I've see better from you but it was enough to get the win

sorry guys this was a quick ketstyle had to get it done tho fast or i wouldn't been able to.post.

East: like the polygraph bar. I honestly thought "Griffey" might have been a place in cali or I was missing something. but really your opener is just maaaaad simple. I know you can beef up your bars more than that. the undertaker bar was simple... ok. but the rehab line... I again thought you were refering to a celeb that was in celeb rehab named griffy but... just another simple bar. Embracing the mega? Jetta punch was ok. Engagement punch was ok too. I figured out what my deal is with some of your bars. If you mention"Griffey's" name in the setup to your punch I keep thinking your about to do a Griffey name flip or wordplay. It's ok to mention a battlers name in a verse obviously but when it's so ingrained in the immediate setup it starts to look like part of the punch... then it isn't. It disappointing especially when the bar isn't very complex. In my personal opinion I'd try to avoid that. you got Good ideas in here but keep working on getting them heavy slapping punches in.

Sean: you opening bars are good. Liked them. I even like the Grief bar (though I'm still staying unbiased lol). Try not to force the reader to look at a battlers past battles to understand your bars tho. I get the bar cause I'm Grief but some people won't and are too lazy to read expos feel me. I really dug the cheerleading bar and felt that should have been the main focus of the entire bar instead of ending on bigelow which isn't as good. just ok. Bunk bed bar had more potential but was just executed ok. I'd call it a decent bar.

Enjoyed you both but my winner here edged it out with slightly harder punches. Good shit guys

Nice lil spar got Sai on the W east wasnt bad at all just felt like the verse was all over the place work harder at placing your syllables correctly your punches were good strongest from you was your closer. Sai had botb with his opener & stayed consistent for the rest much RESPECT fellas fairs in💯

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