Panarapic:

"Let's 'hit the stage', 'break a leg', in the end youll see i 'b one' stronger than your FEMUR RIGHT?...no need fr guns his 'type square' so we jus 'put hands on em', hes KEYBOARD LIKE...no since in tryna fight it still aint gon BE YOUR NIGHT....bro think he nice? ehh he aight, more like 'pooh bear friend, he ass', yea the EEYORE TYPE"

The opening was ehe: I understand that the femur is the strongest bone in the body...but the setup was pretty lack luster, and poorly contrived. Type square/put hands on him/keyboard is a pretty played concept...Pooh bear/friends/donkey/ass play was nice, yet contradictory...shouldn't have given him initial props initially, and the concept would have hit a little harder.

"Silly rabbit playin with the goat, getcha 'top blew/blue' up but this aint MARGE OF COURSE, this a HARDER FORCE...I'll 'phone one line' to 'plug this square in a box' like a CHARGER PORT"

I don't directly understand the 'silly rabbit, playing with the goat'...botch seem equally docile...seemingly, the comparison is equivalent in nature...but figuratively, I understand...but only makes since subjectively. WP must work both way, so how blew/blue corelates with rabbit and goat, I wouldn't understand...yet it highlights the Simpson 'MARGE' comparison, which the build wasn't strong enough to intensify the light jab...phone/plug this square/charger port was a pretty light punch, but great concept...just lacking more examples for the setup.

"Ur 'futures determined' once i 'hand u these lines' but this aint a PALM READIN, this a HARD BEATIN...catch u 'carpoolin witcha homies', 'spray the whip' and leave the CAR LEAKIN"

Future/hand you these lines/palm reading...pretty legit concept, well executed. Car pooling/apart the whip/car leaking...radiator. Good bars here, no critique needed.

"I turn special 'ed' with the choppers, 'get it backwards' and E will C AK's OUT..TRE'S BLOW for niggaz who CHASE CLOUT, ud think hes makin 'snow angels' how he on the ground LAYED OUT"

Special Ed/get it backwards/acting out...good wordplay, but the setup was lacking in a couple of areas...it's enough information about special education and learning disabilities, to stretch this out into a pretty solid punch. Chase tre blow/snow angels/layer out...another played concept, 'making snow angels'

"bring ya crew of lil niggaz, I'll HURL YA GUYS they'll TWIRL THE SKIES..then get 'put in a box with a buncha rounds' like ordered CURL FRIES"

Hurl ya guys/twirl the skies/order of curl fries...broken multis here 3/3/2...and the setup was pretty lacking...seems as if the multis were configured only to rhyme with the punch here, nice concept but poorly executed.

"Check my steez, ima 'take a swing at it', tho i 'handle arms', i wont 'hold back' whn its TIME TO PUNCH....No need to 'spell it with dotted lines', i'll spray lead, this 'pussy will disappear without a trace', u wont be able to FIND THIS CUNT"

Swing/handle arms/time to punch...okay, solid setup...spell it with dotted lines (poor wording here)...'pussy will disappear without a trace' you won't find this cunt? This closer seems like a lazy attempt at just finishing the bar and filling space. No sting at all.

Cake:

"This matchup was pan-cakes, cos u don’t SPIT IT DOPE.. don’t GET TO CLOSE or catch something hot in ya face, ‘GRITS ON STOVE so don’t egg me on or you’re GETTING TOAST"

Good scheming here, but poorly worded...this particular approach could have developed many angles...hot in the face/GRITS ON THE STOVE'...this was a Madea concept...would have like to see a better build on this..."getting toast", made since with your overall idea.

"You dig me bro. Slick approach, I can’t say this TEXTING ROUTE IS NEW so out the gate I’m ‘cooking pan early on to make BREAKFAST OUT OF YOU/ sending to me late doesn’t make you STAND OUT AS COOL cos you got disqualified so I guess that didn’t PAN OUT FOR YOU"

This was a nice build, climactic and we'll executed, no critique here. Dope bar.

"why you duck? just ANSWER THAT G & don’t PAN-der TO ME about how ‘you were busy & taking your SWEET TIME PLUS ductin me and you’ll really ‘BE TIED-UP’"

I felt as though this could have been better worded...I understand what you meant, but the concept was fragmented...and not fully developed.

"stoopid kid bout to catch ALL CASINGS cos you fuckin slower than SLOTHS MATING"

This was humor, I enjoyed it...because I just watched a documentary about sloths, which makes this an accurate depiction.

"it’s way past the dead line idiot but you TAKING THIS LOST once I put this boy in a box coz like annoying a clock it MADE ME TICKED-OFF"

Concept is a little played, but the multis lines up...the execution was pretty sturdy.

"im maid for this so you’ll see the TOOL SPLURTIN cuz I’ll bring the ‘beef to his door’ *knock knock* ROOM-SERVICE"

this was a pretty solid setup, multis came together nicely... creativity was lacking here, left much to be expected...but overall, good jab.

"nothing’s killer bout you so why act as if your SICK IN THIS you wouldn’t get messy hangin round CHICKS IN CLIQUES so listen bitch what i GRIP WILL HIT. The 9s two girls in a cup. You gone LICK THE SHIT"

 The setup was a bit lacking here, but the multis came together nicely. "Two girls and a cup"...lol...LICK THE SHIT, funny...but the punch was lacking in intensity.

"so THE PIPE WILL TORCH THIS VET. “dont let it go to your head”.. that’s my ADVICE BEFORE SUCCESS"

Okay, a little "talk to him moment"...made since, but could have been a little stronger for a closer.

Final thoughts: My winner got the victory with more consistency, creative concepts and compact punches...better multis as well. Seen much better from both.

GB guys, fairs in. 👍

Please excuse the typos in review...auto correct seems to be an issue.

Jus so we're clear...did my last battle...may drop in to say a dilly dilly...jus ain't doing this no more...shit lowers my vibe fr real

Nothing major but both had similar flow to the punch 

I can't say the loser really lost because he had some niceness punches BUt the winner had a few personals that took it

PANORAPIC HAD SOME DECENT IDEAS YOU JUS DUDNT EXPLAIN THEM VERY WELL, YOU NEED TO BE MORE OBVIOUS AS ALOT OF THA TIME I WAS CONFUSED.... IVE SEEN BETTER FROM CAKEDOUT AND TBH I WAS A LIL CONFUSED IN SOME AREAS OF YOUR VERSE AND SOME WORDING WAS AWKWARD, CAKEDOUT HAD A FEW LINES THAT GOT HIM OVER THA EDGE IN THIS BATTLE THO...... FAIR IS DROPPED!