I saw this reasonably clearly. Flow Tagious used more and better multies and filled the box, as well as having some better material.

Mindline, you've definitely got potential, your last four lines were quite nice. However, you need to work on filling the box – don't use line breaks, just type until it counts out 8 lines. Also, try to use multi-syllabic rhymes like Flow Tagious did here.

Flow, this was a reasonably tight verse, but there's still a lot of room to elevate. Firstly, not all of your multies worked. Particularly the last scheme, "fill the box/pretend glocks/firefox", only the final syllable actually rhymed, but all your other multies showed you know how to do it properly so just work on consistency. Also, try to up the number of syllables, from 2-3 to 3-4, it'll really up your quality. My final piece of advice is to read Skizzo's Rap Bible about how to construct punchlines, because I think you're at the level where you should start getting some proper punches into your work.

All in all, good spar, and good luck to both improving from here!

FLOWTAGIOUS - this was a much better verse from you man, love the flow enjoyed the capped multis felt lovely reading ur verse esp coz it is so much better and shows how much you have improved. Yes the punchlines still need work coz most of them are like almost there but still not there yet. the cute position bit was funny lol 

MINDLINE - gotta fill up the box man, flowtagious here used to do the almost the same mistakes you did with ur verse a few weeks ago but the dudes has come a long way. i think both of you can work with each other and ask around and also ask guts to help u with elevating ur skills by getting on the discord server as well.

this is pretty much and auto win here for flow but i'm pretty confident he would have outdone mind even if he had filled up the box.

flowtagious wins with some decent rhymes but no real punches that I can see but they didnt need it

kinda sus you guys both mentioned little dicks i guess theres something you both have in common? lol

One was designed better and easier to put together. Fv