Colossal you show a lot of potential, flow was smooth, wording nice, you need to incorperate punchlinges though because you had 0 impact here. Caked this was a bit by the numbers here, concepts were all old / basic. A basic battle verse was gets the vote due to the punches. 1/

Lmao all this work put in the wrong place

Almost forgot I did this, thanks for not having the bars go to waste

Shit I may have recycled a line cause I thought nobody would bespond to this

Both was just decent. Colossal, I think your only issue is that your style is more live battle ish? If that makes sense. Like I can see where your lines can work live with an audience but they don’t have the same power in text format. When it comes to an 8 line battle, you wanna jam as many punches into that little space as possible which I see caked tried. Caked your punches were not GREAT, they were only decent at most. A bit played. “Wheel feel this ax-a-dent”? Lol no even close to being good.

“That hammer bangs.. Thor when I swing it hard”

even when you put a period, or no period it still reads “that hammer bangs Thor when I swing it hard.”

colossals bird in line was pretty decent but the set up set up took a lot away from it.

colossal had the better flow here. Caked had better punch attempts. This battle will probably be won based off of who gets the final vote. It will be close asf I can tell you that because neither pushed away from each other. Keep elevating guys.

Or I hit em' with the BIG SNIPER bullets come from so far shits had IN FLIGHT SERVICE

^^dayum man!!

This battle was fire I'm giving it to the one with the better punches fair is tossed fellas