im salty i forgot to blind drop lol i feel like i still took this tho even tho flow tagious put cum in my sneakers

I pick on hallow a lot but it's a good example of bad raps "clip full of hollows" he's shooting out some garbage raps 

"a clip full of hollows" a "blank stare" come on man just because its simple doesnt make it not fire the hottest thing you said was "grapefruit technique" come on dude 😂 lets get real these are grown man bars 

i want to understand your creative thought process behind cumming in somebodys socks and putting them back on in some sneakers, is that from personal experience or is it something you saw online?

Just something random I thought of lol, but I don't understand what you are going for in your rap, are you trying to say you work at a day care? "I got the juice so it's naptime I'll put 5 in a cot" what does that even mean. And the teachers notes didn't make much sense, and are you saying you shoot people in the head shoulders knees and toes? If I shot someone it would be all headshots so idk, I guess those are "grown man bars"

you rhymed sarcasm with orgasm CONGRATULATIONS MY GUY LOL

YOU RHYMED AMMO WITH DAMN BRO THATS GENIUS

why I have to cap on you like this is YOU KNEW WHAT I WROTE and this was the best you could do to rebuttal CMON MAN just write better shit next time

U mad bro

lol yes I'm mad u should dropped fire so we could have a classic

fv

Neither had anything standout here in my opinion. One was more on point with setups and bar execution. My loser didn’t have a lot of setups just mostly talking shit in rhyming format. It’s important to set up your punchlines with context to give the bars more sting and awe factor. FV 

You are not: stop swaying. It’s childish. Insulting your opponents verse in the comment box I mean. Your verse was decent with simple but ok punches.

Flow: your verse had no punchlines. Work on that. Also it’s not in good taste to flip your opponents verse. (That’s when you make a line based off of what was in his verse.) Fairs.