Name change wager battle

Expo:

The Hillary in the Flyover States bar is about how in the 2016 US election Hillary Clinton and the Democrats assumes they would win in the rust BELT states and so didn’t really campaign there, then the states suddenly “turned red” by voting republican.

If you don’t get the DaDDiO line check the dudes avatar (and read his battles cos they’re amazing).

The calculus punch has “with respect to X”, which is a term used a lot in calculus to refer to the way in which certain operations are carried out, or as in speaking respectfully about XXXTentacion. Integration is a major element of calculus, and also the undoing of segregation, so racists are likely to oppose it.

Great verse Shodan, good luck!

Also cos I know this may not be clear to people in some other accents, I pronounce “slant” in a what that rhymes with “aren’t”

KILLERS.

Nice spar gents. Felt one showed potential but was very poor in execution. Other had a fire opener and then coasted with the rest of the verse. Fairs in. 1/

This is a NAME CHANGE BATTLE, as we agreed before Lil Talent sent me his verse. If I win, his name will become Kiwi Peewee for a month; if I lose, my name will become Lil Talentless for a month.

Shodan: damn loving that opener. yo overall your verse was CRACK. clean rhymes good execution. good shit!

Lil Talent: your opener had some clean lines and was good execution wise but I gotta say with the amount of space it took up in your verse I don't think it was worth it. seemed like a good jab with the setup of a heavy punch. Liked the Hillary bar, and LOL @Daddio bar. Look.. Daddio's in my crew so I now what you mean but this is such a super hit or miss punch. For me it's personally fine but for others they could easily not like it and be justified. Plus Daddio could change his avy randomly and COMPLETELY fuck up your bar. Try to avoid stuff like this in the future. you closers to me was... good. Only because I read your expo but buddy your going for some high brow references here lol. As advice I'll say this... "the more the reader needs your expo... the less harder it hits (no matter how thought out it is.)

Overall: Enjoyed both personally. My winner I enjoyed overall more in terms of personal impact and wow factor. NICE battle here. fairs in 

Ok nice Lil scap here LT I really like the pages of votes bar in ma history reading battles back to back punching won't win against shodan fam just some advice for u Shodan ya verse was cool I've seen better from u anyway I Shodan edging this slightly more impactful punches on his side than LT Close battle tho

prolly the very best verse i have seen from LT, loved the opner made me lol for real lol. the only drawback being u went a little too overboard with personals and were a little short on concepts the trick is to actly miss the concept/wordplays with a personal for that lethal kinda style u looking for and will nail too pretty soon i'm sure.

Needless to say tho, sho definitely brought it here tho, that inca wrecked bit was dope!

and so as the LTD play, the opener was well okayish i dunno i didn't resonate much with it, not sure if ASMR videos send shivers down the spine or that tingling feeling or if the tingling feeling can be referred to as shivers, either way

i am eaning with sho here, but greatly impressed with LT's show as well!

Typos - 

Not opener but closer*

Not miss but mix*

Loser had a build up of long portion which hendered the punch vaule . Got the word play tho. 

Winner had better schemes and quicker punches in bunches

fv is in

Wow, this was one hell of a battle. Will return for further review, BaNG! 

Really nice verse Lil Talent.  Probably your best to date. So props on that. Really like the first punch, even though it didn't hit that hard. Concept was funny af, because it's true lol. The rhyming of the next bar (which was really long, imo) is ver clean and flowed smooth. But when having such a long concept, you need to keep the punch hitting with jabs and mini punches, because if the amount of space that is used on said concept. Other than that I think the "stumped" w/p/setup was weak and not very thought out. Punch was pretty good though. Closer was a nice way to end it. Overall you had a very clean verse with very few errors. 

Sho- giving you the w here with a more creative drop as a whole.  With the exception of that "taking shots/drunkenly" reference lol that was pretty bad. However that was not enough for you to loose this battle. 

You also had the botb, imo...

My crew's ready for a kidnapping, when this LENGTH OF ROPE IS DRAWN we'll "pull up at your house to prepare for a capture" but it AIN'T A POKÉSTOP!!

Fair is laid down. I'm outtie.

The winner of this battle used his punching power to his advantage, choosing to go punch after punch, scoring critical points. My loser was not at all far behind, he brought the better amount of personals to the table that I really enjoyed. After the opener though (which was dope) he seemed to lose a little steam. Good battle