super dope I preferred the winners schemes and creativity but I liked danny tanners setups a lot

wow

His name used to be Reborb Mersilon. Good luck, fella!

Opponent: was very creative...yet, I do feel because of the conceptual overload...the punches lost their steam and went flat at points... specifically the closer, but the subject matter made for a good read. 

My winner: the STAPH infection bar gets high marks, very well executed and creative. I felt that your setups and other punches could have needed more attention. Closer was okay, was wondering where you were going with it...but was pleasantly surprised by the Pen.

Overall: GB, FV Good matchup

Kinda hard to follow Re's rhyme scheme so that hurt the flow on first reading. The opener was a really cool concept. I'm not a big fan of only using two multies in a punch because I think it usually hurts the delivery although Danny did that too so you were both equal on that. 

I'm giving this to Danny for the consistency of his punches throughout. 

REZN: I actually really like your opener. Unorthodox and effective. Now the second ones wording was a bit shaky at the start. Everything before hands on his neck. Hands on his neck was great but the whole bar including the ending felt like setup. Ending the bar with “LIKE A GUITAR” or something would have drove it home. That’s the simplest way and probably the most basic way but the point is to DRIVE IT HOME. Good wp but make sure it works both ways. “Banned in the threads”... is there a musical band playing in the threads. People are sticklers for that sort of thing. Closing lines are very basic but there. Go for more stuff like you’re openers. Good shit dude

Dan: like the opener but I wish there was more setups. I would had a line calling him a safe Pussy or something THEN through the punch. Love the 2nd too! 3rd... like it but I gotta say I wish you worded it better. You started the bar about his writs being shit then switched to the mod thing. I’d imply that he’s a “corrupt/shit mod” THEN hit the punch. Like your closers!

fairs in. My winner impressed me more with consistency overall. Good bout fellas