Pretty clear cut win here for Revan. He had some pretty good punches in there. Down to the wire/finish closely was his best one, imo. Rest of the verse stayed on the same consistent level with no real drop off to it. Kicking the rust, but not a bad return verse at all. Luigi you gotta long way to go, but you've got potential to get better from here if you really wanna do that. You just happened to have your first battle be sniped by a Hall of Famer, and you can obviously take some pointers from his prior work, also I would look in to reading up on folks like Edgeworth, Seul, Shodan, Rai, GOOD GRIEF, and the likes of them, as they are also talented writers and battlers in their own right. It's the best surefire way to get better, all you have to do is want to get better.

Damn! Site needed this badly. RULE obviously won, because he had 1.5x the content and it was just much better in terms of rhyming, concepts, and punchlines. Luigi was very basic in his rhyming and throwing out punches sparingly. 

RULE, I thought this was a good verse to drop in a return, even in a snipe. You had some good WP that worked both ways (which we love on LB now), and some hard lines specially that closer. Look forward to seeing more. 

man fix your caplock

Luigi: I see potential in your drop. your opponent is a long time battler. When it come to format and structure RULE demonstrates how your verse should somewhat be like and look. For other examples check out other battlers such as DaDDiO, Edgeworth, or Rai. RULE wins this one using multi-syllable rhymes, punchlines, and wordplay (tho the second half of his verse was meh.) fairs in. 

Need to fill in the box Luigi it was also pretty basic 

FVVB...my winner was more polished and consistent, a solid drop. One could improve his structure, but overall...has potential. 😊👍

this was almost an autowin coz luigi's whole verse seemed fillerish and irrelevant while Revan pretty much nailed every requrement without even giving it his best or average shot.

WAS HARD FINDIN LUIGI's RHYMES FOR THA MOST PART.... YOU HAVE POTENTIAL WITH THA CONCEPTS THO, JUS HAVE TO STOP PRESSIN ENTER AN START EXPANDIN ON SOME OF YOUR IDEAS AN STRETCH THEM OUT OVER A WHOLE BAR........ REVAN KILLED IT TBH, LOOSEN UP WP WOZ NICE, LIKED THA 'WIZARD DOIN MAGIC' PART TOO, YOU CLASSICK MOFO!...... NOT A TOUGH DECISION HERE AT ALL, FAIRS IN!

Damn, Rev writing 16 lines for this no concessions given. 

Not better than the last verae I read but top notch nonetheless two strong haymakers took this one Luigi you got potential you just happen to Run into into one the Best you could learn from this loss fam

Lu's an up/friendly advice woahhh dope nameplay straight up shit since you giving rookies a shot RULE when's my turn

felt the winner steamrolled their opponent in terms of formatting punching multis etc., opponent just seemed a bit lacking in experience but had a decent sense of good concepts/metaphors to use.

luigi should work on their multis and formatting in order to make their punches hit harder

Okay so the Luigi dude was really out of it. Nothing in that verse was even LOOKED like a good bar, honestly. Revan, I don't recall having seen you battle on here before but hats off to you. I think some of your punches could have been executed a little better but the amount of cleverness behind them is not something that I see every day! I really want to see more of your punches famo. Big ups to both for putting in the effort but I have a clear winner! 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

Clear decision really, read Revan's verse a couple times over the course of the last couple days and was impressed. Good to see you back, bro! For the loser, it would be a good decision to kind of read how Revan is writing out his bars and apply it to your own writing. Fairs in, yall!