This was genuinely really hard to call for me. I felt that You Are Not Wanted had some really nice ideas and a decent amount going on in his verse, although it wasn't formatted properly so some of it was lost on me. RED BARON had a much nicer flow and execution but almost nothing in the way of punchlines, I really feel like you took your opponent way too lightly here.

In the end I gave this to You Are Not Wanted because I value concepts over execution, although it was close. The "crack a dudes smile" and "far the figure" lines were some of the best in the battle, RED BARON your "fat guys in a race" line was just about your only punchline, you were really lacking any kind of double-meanings elsewhere in your verse. I won't give RED BARON feedback because I've seen you do much better and I know you just took the dude too lightly here. YANB try to keep your formatting consistent throughout (CAPITALISE all of your multies) as well as trying to make your wordplay make sense both ways ("no matter how far the figure" makes grammatical sense but "no matter how father figure" doesn't).

Good battle matey!

Good stuff also "far the figure"/"father figure" for those sleep

also I forgot to mention WANTED

yanb I really liked your father figure line, great stuff, u got good awareness of multi structure and while da internal rhymes could be slick i think u got 2 tighten up ur setups considerably, too much space between the main multis stunts the flow

u also got goos punch potential, da next step in boostin ur creativity is 2 try and avoid a simile wherever possible, try a verse where u ban urself from using the word like

despite all this i thought u edged the battle

baron u took him light, the ak scheme had a questionable multi and u just werent punching with da complexity u capable of

fairsin

FV BSA

FV BSA

how did bobby vote twice?

He didn’t. It’s just a comment. Plus lil talents vote counts as 4 votes cuz he’s part of FVC. So you got this already.

Winner was way more consistent with schemes and delivery of the punchline content

good shit red haha glad I could sneak a quick dub in