I gave this to GG comfortably.

GG, I thought your opening few lines were excuted really well and it was a bit of a twist to do a nameplay on yourself. Unfortunately for you here, Eastes didn't come with the kind of nameplays you predicted, so it kind of fell flat, but that's the risk you take when you try to pre-empt lines. The rest of your verse wasn't bad, and your closing punch was a highlight. However, a lot of your wordplay was really reaching. For instance - "trim her/tremor" doesn't really work afaik, you really need to only do wordplays that are definitely spotlessly clean.

Eastes, a big reason you lost here was how unclear your verse was. Sometimes your multies were capped, sometimes in quotation marks, sometimes with hyphens. I got really lost and there seemed to be multi sets that only appeared once. Just generally this was really messy, just pick one way to indicate multies and stick with it. I thought your traffic guard line was solid though, and the "park flipped backwards" punch was a nice idea and executed alright.

PYW SEASON 3 WEEK 2 BATTLE 

Piccolo fusing bar was tough the LOTB imo the other one came w/ okay ideas but the execution and creativity wasnt all the way there but props to both

for me that was a draw even as a battle gets but i must vote so FV

The flow determined everything for me.. multis n punches couldve been better with the right set ups. FV in

Good little bout here. Took me a second to link up GG’s rhymes because they were kind of a bit before the end of the lines and a bit unorthodox, but the flow was nice once you linked it up. east had good little inner rhymes in his own right in between his Multis which were properly spaced out. Kinda even so Flow didn’t really decide much for me. I went with GG because I was feeling a couple more of his punches and thought he was just a bit more creative and out the box with his concepts.

Oh this was close as fuck Grief first bar was a wasted due to him having name flip and Eastes had some stuff felt overused... Eastes opener was nice..I felt like Eastes might pulled an upset here close very close

I liked the idea of GG's opener, getting out ahead of name flips but the execution didn't work. The Picollo bar was a bit confusing and the Rictor line was probably your best but that's not saying a lot because Trim-Her doesn't really work with Tremor imo. Overall I've seen much better from GG. Multies also seemed a bit forced and basic at points. 

Eastes had a higher punch count and actually had a few decent concepts although again execution wasn't always the best. I suggest doing 3 multies per punch as opposed to 2, it sets the bar up better. Park flipped backwards was creative although the execution could have been better, same with playground collapses. 

Overall I give this to Eastes. 

GG, dope verse. Opener was nicely done, setups were relevant. Good execution througout, only thing that caught me out was the wp, You Nailin' Combinations With Bodies / You, Nail, N  Combo nations w/ bodies? Bit iffy lol but the punch was fresh imo. Closer was nice and had a comedic element to it, overall a good verse where the punches landed with sting and there was good execution throughout. 

East, the drop was ok. Opener was nice, with a good flip. But you kinda fell off after that imo. The punches were there but your execution could have been a lot better. Closer was a bit lacklustre, could have had a better setup. Overall your punches would have landed with more impact if you'd executed them better. I felt like you tried packing too much shit in, tried being too complex and it didn't work. Gotta find the balance between creativity and readability.

Loser was forcing and lacked structure to the punch some lines were played and some punches were just useless to me.

 Winner had ok bars . Few forced word play lines as well . Has best bar of the battle so I have to give em the W fv