Got Skitt taking this with a few bars I liked more here in comparison to Josain. Skitt had the Steve Austin scheme going which was pretty decent. That was his standout. Feel like the rhyming was a bit too simplistic in areas for my taste, but to each their own. Josain you've got the general idea of dissing your opponent down but you need to do it in a more clever fashion to get the W. Just saying he removed his ribs to suck his own dick is funny and all, but outside of saying that, there really isn't much for the reader to really look in to. Rhyming was also pretty simplistic here, as well, but that will come with extra practice. Fair is in.

Both battlers here had some witty and entertaining bars, although neither of them really got the conventions of text battling. I gave this to Skitt_Blazin for having much smoother multies and some nicer punches.

JosainSplorgat you had some funny lines and some decent punches, the "month/nuts/enough" lines were probably your best. However, your rhymes were basically all single-syllable. Try to have multi-syllabic rhymes, 3+ syllables should always be your objective.

Skitt you said you don't text battle much and it showed. I don't mean that as an insult, its just that your verse here was clearly made with audio in mind. Your flow was very slick, your lines were quite smooth and you had some good ideas. However, text battling is quite different to audio battling. If you're looking at textceeing more regularly, I'd have a look at some text battlers like Edgeworth, Shodan, Jimmy Hoffa, Rai. Generally, in text, multies are much longer and less frequent (4-6 syllables typically but generally no more than three times per bar). Your closer and opener were the first and second best botbs imo, so good job on the win.

Skitt attacked his opponent more and had the all around better verse