Chekkit had a lot of aspects to his verse that were just not very good at all (source and broke don't rhyme, and a lot of your punches are blatantly obvious before you even spit your rhyme with the punchline in it), but he brought more impactful material here than Gilly, who had really nothing to try to critique or give guidance about.

So you critique me for having “dawn” donkey type, “mon” monkeys wife in my last battle. Cause it’s a seriously bad broken multi as you say. Yet it’s okay to have.

”AGREEABLE SOURCE” to MATERIALS BROKE

“FUCKING ICICLE” to PUBLISH FIRE THOUGH

“SO HOT I SLAY THE DUDE” to POP THE FAGGOT TOO

“OFTEN SAY ITS TRUE” to FORGOT TO PAY HIS DUES

its interesting to me that all these newer cats want so bad in the FVC they put more effort into these long lengthy expos like there some yelp reviewer than there own battles. 

If half my verse was rambling and the other half was disappointing half cocked ideas. Then WTF you call this verse here. The same god damn thing you canadian maple syrup eating sorry saying wannabe critic. 

Lmao Red. I call it good enoughto school your on the raggedy ann ass. Faggot.

im give it to check on how he filled the 8

Easy vote here. Chekkit's verse was terrible but his opponent didn't even fill the box or bring double-meanings, so C wins. Fair's in.

Chekkit is in EOA too :O lol

Gilly i can only tell you to learn from chekkit's verse here to better understand how and what to post in text battles here rest of the requirements that you need to work as is already specified in the battle criterias too, and kindly do work on them i see a lot of potential in ur current level too.

Chekkit - nice snipe dude, but the public bicycle is played as hell man, back hand was aite. easy wine here.

Gilly was just lacklustre, did not fill the box and did not have any moments with impact. Chekkit was much mor better although there was a lot of issues wit his verse e.g : You idiot. Try spitting from an AGREEABLE SOURCE! Tried 'Throwing his Arms' but his MATIERALS BROKE! That multi is off and broken to pieces as Source can never sound like broke bro. No matter what. either way u still had better material so there goes the fair