I gave this to Flow tagious for having a cleaner structure, better punches and some decent multies.

Hallow, you need to spend some time just reading over top battlers on the site, seeing how they structure their verses and replicating that. People like Shodan, Jimmy Hoffa and Edgeworth would be good to look at, but even just looking at the structure that people like Chekkit, Sean Griffey or CakedOut are using would help you. You stayed focussed on attacking your opponent here, but it was just one stream of words, try to have more separate lines and multies like Flow tagious did here.

Flow tagious, your verse was solid enough to win here. Your closer was probably your best line and the botb, all of them were kind of funny but in order to step up your quality you need to work on having punchlines and wordplay. If you're unsure of how to do this, people like Skizzo have some guides written in the forums, or you can try reading the verses of people like Shodan, Jimmy Hoffa, Edgeworth and Rai. Also, when you have multi-syllable rhymes, you need to CAPITALISE them like so to make them easier for voters to notice.

I didn't use my usual style cause I didn't want to waste my creativity on this battle

ha that was HUmorious it was mad me laugh

hallow's stuff is unintelligble, not sure what's going on here. Clear win for flow, but definitely not up to his normal level, as he indicated already.

SLIGHT IMPROVEMENT FROM HALLOW AS YOU ACTUALLY HAD A COMMA AND A FULLSTOP IN YOUR VERSE, YOU ATTEMPTED SOME BITCHSLAPS BUT THA MAJORITY OF YOUR HITS FELL FLAT...... NOT A GREAT RESPONSE TBH BUT YOU DEFO DID ENOUGH TO GET MY VOTE, YOUR WERE MORE DIRECT AN HAD A PERSONAL APPROACH WHICH I LIKED, THAT WAS HARD TO READ FROM BOTH THO...... FAIR IS DROPPED!