Straight up didn't like this battle. This felt like one person trying to slang and colloquial terms without fully understanding how to speak English vs a person trying to be too complex for their own good when the simpler route would've been more effective. Overall I gotta give it to East here because although he basically reached every line (how do you force Arthritis THROUGH someone?), he made a lot more sense with his bars, even though he was trying far too hard to make his bars sound more complex than they really are. Wrathchild had a lot of mistakes regarding wording of his bars (why would a star glow from his side? This doesn't make sense at all) and wordplay that doesn't work at all (Yeast/East? Nah, bro.) You're both capable of writing WAY better than this.

this battle is for the - Prove Your Worth: Season 3

Leggoo

Nice spar fellas. Pretty evenly matched couple wording & execution issues on both sides but with a lil work its an easy fix. Im rollin with East on this felt he was a bit more polished. Wrath good drop sir seen more complexity from you in the past but this was still good try to incorporate more punches as opposed to jabs. East had botb with the prostitute line💪 much respect fairs in💯

WrathChild first bar could've been nice my dude but it just don't rhyme sorry fam gotta take points of for that my advice look at synonym fam fabric loosely rhymes wit talent I'll explain later fam. But nice concept the deadline had potential just didn't flip it well st the erase ox bar landed flat and the closer was eh...gotta be tough on ya fam cause we both trying elevate together you still the homie tho not a bad drop tho

First time seeing u o Eastes x you got those horror bars on deck b shit just didn't work for me like for instance skeletor in shackles huh like I'm tripping but you might just shaking rust every thing mediocre or just fell flat on thing that was decent imo was the setting up a prostitute bar which made me chuckle it wasn't a bad verse fam technical issues I guess

Tbh was I'm leaning towards wrathWrath on this one was just more entertainines with verse it'll been more entertaining if he didn't have rhyming issues Estes if you gonna do horror bar you need to be alight more clever just to direct so mvgt WrathChild

First vote in almost a decade, nice to see the this site still has bars.... both good drops, but one had a defo edge to it... vote is in

Expos- 

ties as in the ones that you wear with a suit

Limit is a deadline as well as used for finding the value of a function in maths

sun rises from the east and is also a star

yeast is generally used to raise the dough used to make bread

dough also used as money here

and a deer is also called a doe 

both were pretty good, hard decision, comes down to whose was just that little bit better and it was eastes here for me, even tho he made some punctual/spelling errors i figured it out, good shit boys

Going bar by bar here to try and give you gusy some in-depth feed.

Nick

you aint suited for this bitch he NEEDS MORE TALENT cz the only ties he got with good lines is a PIECE OF GARMENT

The wording here is a complete reach, nobody refers to sewing or making clothes as "tying lines together". Not to mention this multi is horrible. 

so if they got functional value best believe that SHIT IS A GIMMICK cz his verses are so full of dead lines it's like his SPIT IS A LIMIT 

This was actually a pretty clever concept, just not super well executed from a wording perspective. You also run the risk of a lot of other dudes here not catching this shit. Lol. 

& seem to be dyed in dull colours cz we never see bright FLOWS FROM THIS GUY & maybe sunrises is the only time we may ever see the star GLOW FROM HIS SIDE

What the hell is this even supposed to mean? What star? Why would a star be glowing from anyones side?

else he only brings real beef after i', done SLAYING THIS LAME until eastes is erased & only the letters ox STAY IN HIS NAME cz if this east(yeast)ever RAISED THE DOUGH with his cheap rhymes its cz he adopted a deer & GRAZED THE DOE.

east/yeast is a big reach as they sound nothing alike. The closer is horrible too. How the hell do you graze a doe? you also just said basically you'd only raise the dough (doe) by adopting the deer and feeding the doe. Just has no impact man. It's repetitive and a redundant statement, not even a punch.

Overall, your structure and rhyming is bad with poorly executed ideas and wording. You did have a couple spots of creativity but you shot yourself in the foot with a rocket launcher with mistakes.

East

ot a mere frag or meeting im leavin you "Tore-And-Tackle" If he man? Then I’m gawd!! So what you have instores debacle when I force arthritis through this "Arch- Rival" till his bones "Wear-A-Weigh" creating a SKELETOR IN SHACKLES!!

This is way too fucking stretched out, man. Convuluted set up to get to just a mediocre punch. Not to mention, how the fuck are you gonna force arthritis through someone? This was poor.

Leave his optics chewed! Then slice his neck and leave his "Epiglottis-Doomed"!!/and press on your skeletal the pump’ll stop and shot! As i leave your "Frame-On-The-Corner" and im not talking about SETTING UP A PROSTITUTE’!!!

Again a bit long to the punch but this punch paid off better. A pretty clever idea on what should be a played concept, but was fresh. I still contend that saying shit like "I'll have his Epiglottis doomed" is reachy af and just too over the top. 

Tear his guts out! Then put um in a casket! I’ll have him "Go-In-The-Box" with his eye closed like hosting a surprise party at a BUMS HOUSE!!!//

This felt reachy, but it was funny and entertaining. Seemed to be done in good taste. But, as long as you understand this isn't a haymaker and actually is providing comedic value to your verse, then it's all good.

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Overall, I have to go with East as I felt both were about even on creativity and even though I thought East made some execution errors, Nicks were much larger, noticable, and hindered the verse more.

PYW Season 3 - Week 1

Thanks for the bar by bar edge really appreciate it.

will try to adhere to better standards and ensure all my future drops got no typos so that i dnt come off as the bobs and vagene dude who does not know english lol

congratulations on the win eastes ! 

The wording here is a complete reach, nobody refers to sewing or making clothes as "tying lines together". Not to mention this multi is horrible.

^ the ties bit was a reference towards Ties as in the ones worn with suits not sewing.

gb fam i liked the bright shemes nice