This was a clear win for Danny, and he was ahead in every aspect by a long way. That being said, Flow tagious has clearly got some potential.

Danny, obviously using such a long scheme was quite a challenge but you handled it really well and came out with a great verse as a result. There were a couple of issues though. Initially I felt the scheming was a bit inconsistent as far as stressing of syllables and cadence, although having gone through it a few more times I think I'm wrong. The pirate bar was so out of the blue it almost made me laugh out loud, so although I don't think the syllabe-stress works both ways it's probably botb. Your closer was funny too, although I genuinely have no idea what "lick in the win, doe?" actually means and unless there's something I don't get the wording was very forced.

Flow tagious your verse wasn't bad but it was missing two key aspects which you need to have a chance of winning. One of these is punchlines, there are many guides on how to write them in the forums so I suggest you look there. The other is multies. Most of your lines had two-syllable rhymes (i.e. denim/venom) which is a good start. However, instead of having heaps of really short rhymes, try having fewer, longer rhymes (at least 3 or 4 syllables for every rhyme is something to aim for) and capitalising the rhyming syllables like THIS so they're more apparent to voters.

Good battle!

WASNT TOO HOT ON DANNYS LONG RHYME SCHEME TBH BUT THA CONCEPTS WERE OK, THA ''WIN DOE'' WP IS NOT THAT ORIGINAL BUT THA CLOSER STILL MADE ME CHUCKLE A LIL..... FLOW VERSE WAS OK AN EASY TO FOLLOW BUT YOU NEED TO BE MORE EXPERIMENTAL WITH YOUR RHYMES IN TEXT, YOU COULD TAKE A FEW POINTERS FROM DANNYS VERSE HERE...... DT TAKES THIS QUITE CONVINCINGLY, FAIR IS DROPPED!

danny gets this just because he had the multis and was dissing his opponent while flow had mostly only self hype lines with really basic rhyme schemes.

Danny came harder with actual lines that made more sense and punch 

sorry flow, but u got flow tho