Both verses were at about the same quality level here, so TooYoung takes the victory due to having two or three times the quantity of content.

Hsumicha you should work on filling up the whole box, so instead of using line breaks just keep typing until the line counter at the top of the box tells you you have 8 lines written. You have some potential, but also try to have multi-syllable rhymes at the end of each line. Your "battle me/shaq 3" lines were the only ones that actually attacked your opponent though, and that's the most important thing to do in a rap battle. Try to focus on doing this, too.

TooYoung the structure of your verse here was a whole flurry of really short lines with basic rhymes and no punchlines. To take it to the next level, try to have fewer, longer lines with more complex, multi-syllable rhymes (try to aim for every rhyme to have more than three syllables). Your lettuce line at the start was one of your best, it shows you have the general idea of attacking your opponent through similes. Punchlines are essentially more complex similes/metaphors, so try to work on doing lines like this more.

Had a seizer reading both.

More content and the content was much better. Not much here to pick at. Tooyoung

Neither impressed me and both could do to check out battles on here by big names such as Jimmy Hoffa or Edgeworth. Also, be more focused on your opponent rather than talking about yourself. Anyway, TooYoung filled the box and that's why I'm voting for him. Fair's in.