Yeah this is one sided. Good bar, KK. Shoo take notes from your opponent's one bar in regards to what it takes with your rhyming, punchlines, and what it takes to make a good bar.

Shoo you need to have a look at other battlers on the site to see how things are done here. Don't use line breaks, just keep writing and fill up the whole box. Also try to have multiple-syllable rhymes and CAPITALISE them like so to improve your lines. Your "rapper/hamper" lines were the only ones that actually rhymed as far as I could see, try to work on introducing more rhyming in your verse in general.

Kold Krhymez obviously your 1-bar was enough here (and thus necessarily the botb). You clearly didn't bring your A-game here (for good reason) so I doubt feedback is really helpful, although "How you scourging a verse" didn't really make much sense to me if that helps.

the fuck do these cats be talkin bout lmao. I can't eveb snipe this...it wouldn't be right

Winner did what he had to lol

yeah KK you didn't need to. you had a punch and shoo didn't. Shoo could do to learn from some of the best name on the site currently, such as Jimmy Hoffa, Edgeworth, and Rai. And fill the box, bro. Fill that box. Fair's in.

Completely obvious. KK was miles ahead in every category that matters. Commended for matching the content length and not taking that extra advantage but didn’t need it for sure.

that was a hard ass bar kold, lmao not much a challenge

lol easy snipe here

kold's single bar matched every criteria for a win while none of shoo's matched even a single one