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Ima need both hands to FUCK YOU UP

gotta good let's go

Adolf wins this purely for having harder hitting punchlines. Shit like the Haymaker line and the Genesis line were dope... punchline wise. Though Adolf’s Verse realllly decreased in quality when he disses Wrathchild. The dude u suck and Fuck u Up didn’t have any discernable set-up to it, and since they certainly weren’t punchlines, they were definitely filler content. Also some of your set-ups are worded pretty badly, and some of them don’t connect. The sonic line should be worded like this “Cause when I fire off the glock, you’ll be catching more rounds than sonic in SEGA GENESIS”. The set-up is longer, but it has better clarity, and is grammatically correct. Another one is the layup line, the set-up isn’t connected to the punchline. Your multi’s were severely broken too. Worst examples of that is: “Actin Like you” and “Broad Side of a” these two lines are NO WHERE NEAR rhyming, and the latter has one less syllable than the former. “Win this” and “Sega” don’t rhyme as well, and the latter had 5 syllables compared to the former having 3. “Wrathchild” doesn’t rhyme with “toast”, and the former has an extra syllable compared to the latter. “Dude You Suck” and “Fuck You Up” is the closest the verse has to a proper multi, and even then Dude doesn’t really rhyme with fuck. Mouse suffered from everything a bad verse can suffer from. Mouse didn’t have any multi’s, he had no punchlines and formatted his verse so badly to the point you couldn’t follow anything he was saying. Mouse needs to make sure his punchlines follow proper punchline format, And read up on basics. Despite both having an overall poor showing, the win definitely goes to Adolf, for having a superior verse in all 5 categories.

Mouse: Read Up on Basics, you won’t go anywhere with verses like that.

Adolf: Keep them punches rolling at a steady pace, but make sure you filter out the filler. Work on the multi’s and set-ups too, and then for sure you can challenge the likes of Lillian Kilogram and Hauer.

Thanks fam still practicing my craft

Honestly not motivated to drop the feed here right now as I’m on mobile. But I’ll just say that aadolf was just better in every category that matters. Still had some issues looks like SodkdksjejnenSkiid might have touched on it in his vote but not sure. 

THA MAJORITY OF MOUSES VERSE WAS SELF-HYPE WHICH LET YOU DOWN, YOU NEED TO FOCUS YOUR LYRICS ON ATTACKING YOUR OPPONANT, ALOT OF YOUR STUFF WAS MORE OF A CYPHER AN YOU STAYED ON THA ''MOUSE' CONCEPT FOR WAY TOO LONG DUDE, NEXT TIME AIM YOUR MATERIAL AT THA OTHER BATTLER...... ADOLF YOU REALLY NEED TO WORK ON YOUR MULTIs DUDE AS NEARLY ALL OF THEM WERE EITHER SLIGHTLY BROKEN OR EXTREMELY FORCED, YOU NEED TO WORK ON THIS ESPECIALLY IF YOUR GONNA DISS SOMEONE ELSES MULTIs WITHIN YOUR OWN VERSE LOL. YOUR CONCEPTS, PUNCHES AND WORDING ARE HELLA ON POINT SO SORT OUT THOSE RHYMES AN YOU'LL BE A REAL PROBLEM IN THA NEAR FUTURE.  BOTB WAS SPITTERS OPENER.

LMFAO @ the wrathchilds multis bit. Easy win here for adolf tho i just didnt have much to make anything of mousesonic's verse here i mean he was not even at par with the likes of savage or too young here.

Further LMAOs after reading HVK's feeds LMAO!!