cops ll have your DOGS BODY SPOT!!

^ i dnt think this meant what you meant it to mean lol

the only good line was the no longest yard bit rest was good on multis but poor on concept and execution.

PS - i think savagesocietygunna is a multi of Jay diamond fo sho!!

Anyways fairs in Uday gets this easy.

i seee yall homies .. u kno i killed ya mans

Appreciated. Its 'crip'pled / walk your talk btw. 

UDAY STARTED OK BUT THA VERSE KIND OF GOT WEIRDER AS THA VERSE WENT ON, ''LIKE A STUNGUN CHASE I CAUGHT HIM SHOCKED'' WAS MY FAV PART FROM THIS WHOLE BATTLE, BUT, ALOT OF YOUR RHYMES WERE REALLY FORCED AND ''DOGS BODY SPOT'' MADE LITTLE SENSE AS YOU WOULDNT SAY THAT IN A CONVERSATION.  ''WALK THA TALK'' ALSO MADE NO SENSE...... SAVAGE AGAIN YOUR REPEATING RHYMES, YOU SAID ''SHIT'' 3 TIMES IN YOUR OPENING TWO LINES, RHYMIN ''SHIT'' WITH ''SPIT'' IS REALLY BASIC, WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOU EXPERIMENT AN TAKE MORE RISKS WITH YOUR RHYMIN, YOU ALSO RHYMED ''VIC'' TWICE AT THA END WHICH IS A NO-NO AS REAPEATING RHYMES WILL EITHER BE SEEN AS ''LAZY'' OR ''BASIC'', DEPENDING ON THE READER...... BOTH NEED WORK IN CERTAIN AREAS BUT UDAY PUT THA LIL MORE EFFORT IN HERE IN TERMS OF RHYMIN, AND HE ATTEMPTED SET-UPS TO HIS PUNCHLINES WHICH IS ALWAYS GONNA OUTWEIGH A VERSE OF RHYMIN WORDS WHERE MOST ARE REPEATED RHYMES...... BOTH HAVE POTENTIAL, BUT UDAY GETS MY VOTE HERE FOR THA REASONS STATED ABOVE..... FAIR IS DROPPED!

who r u to give advice on hip hop..what makes you a expert.. drake got u uk fools gassed but okay thaxx...ctfu

ITS CALLED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM DUDE, IF SOMEONE FULLY EXPLAINS THEIR VOTE YOU COULD TAKE A FEW POINTERS WHICH CAN HELP YOU IMPROVE AN ELEVATE.

i got a battle posted why u still aint took it. cus u can t see what i said so u pussy..  get off my shit trash act mod!

TOP DEFINITION. walk the talk1) Back up or prove what's said with action. 2) Represent words with action. 3) Practice what's preached.

I leave him crip'pled (crip - gang) so he can walk the talk?. It makes sense.

Thanks for the vote and the points. 

who is jay diamond n what does im a multi ?

IVE HEARD OF ''TALK THA TALK'' AND ''WALK THA WALK'', BUT NEVER HEARD ''WALK THE TALK'' IF IM HONEST.

Also the company meaning a firm and company as in people with him / stock drop

Uday got it with a clear edge becuse he had more clear attempts at punches whereas Ssg was a bit more on the cypher side and didn’t come at the opponent enough 

i see im on my way tot he top.. bcuz the mods are shook my first day they hating knowin im hotter then everyone ive battled so far.. but they wont take my battles..i got poeple sayin im jay diamond whoever that is but i heard he nic3 so   its ku.. one of you fag ass MODS challange me then.. lmaaaaaaaaao .... #savagesocietytakeover. nocapppp..the hate is real but yall fools are fake.. fuckwit me or fuckoutta here..

im bout that shit   question mark.. so he asking..lol ok.. like a stun gun chase.. wtf them are bars get the fuck outta here.. yall lames for even thinking thats hot .. i shot his squad you shall them fall..ctfuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu  .. its all good tho..LOL

Wow , isnt it ironical that youre ‘picking’ my bars , look at what you ‘dropped

#BARS OF WHAT...lmaoooooooo

oh n who<S a crip ..lol prewriting ass rapps ...lolllll

Everybody wanna be a gangsta til that SHIT ,FLY..

body full of MAGETS .. who you know fucking around ..I layem down quickly  LIL REESE shitty. cus lil reese got jumped n boxers was shitty.. yall stupid i guess .. kool battle homie..lmaooo

Lmao you didnt even put an effort to write, why are you complaining? 

mm