I LIKED KK's ''IN THA BLINK OF AN EYE'' CONCEPT, ALSO LIKED THA ''TIPSY ELDER'' PART.  ALOT OF YOUR RHYMES WERE EXTREMELY FORCED THO AN MADE ALMOST NO SENSE AS YOU WOULDNT SAY THESE SENTENCES IN A REAL CONVERSATION, ''ALL HE STATE IS PERVERT LIKE SCHEMES'' ''AND SURE LICKING WESSONS'' ''FLOOD POUNDS IN CITIES MAN'' ''FREEZING POOP BE TESTING ME'' ARE A FEW EXAMPLES OF WHAT I MEAN, IF SOMETHING DOSENT MAKE 100% SENSE THEN DONT FUCKIN USE IT COZ IT TAKES ALOT AWAY FROM YOUR MATERIAL....... TWC YOUR FIRST LINE MADE ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE AT ALL, IMAGINE IT IN A CONVERSATION ''this fucks writtens so yuck folks echo U with ewws(Us)like it's he it's CONSONANCE'' <<< IF SOMEONE CAME UP TO ME AN SAID THAT AS A SENTENCE I WOULD HONESTLY THINK THEY WERE RETARDED AS FUCK, I DID LIKE YOUR ''VOWEL BETWEEN CONSONANT'' CONCEPT IT WAS JUS DELIVERED AN EXECUTED EXTREMELY POORLY IMO.  EVERYTHING FROM ''TALK CHEAP RADICALLY'' ALL THA WAY UP TO ''TUGS OF WAR'' DIDNT IMPRESS ME AT ALL, I THOUGHT ALOT OF THA RHYMES WERE FORCED AN THA IDEAS YOU WERE IMPLEMENTIN WERE WEIRD AS FUCK ''UR SHIT WOULDNT JAM TIGHT EVEN IF A MONSTER COCKS FUCKED U BALLS DEEP'' IS AN EXAMPLE.  THA ''FALL OVER LIKE A ROW OF DOMINOS'' WAS AN OK PART, BUT WHAT WERE YOU RHYMIN ''ROW OF DOMINOS'' WITH? COZ I COULDNT FIND THA RHYME.  ''DELIVERABLES GONNA BE HOT'' ALSO MADE NO SENSE....... BOTH GUYS MADE ALOT OF ERRORS HERE AN TBH I WASNT IMPRESSED BY EITHER, I FELT KK MADE A FEW LESS ERRORS THO SO IMMA LAY MY VOTE IN THAT DIRECTION, I SUGGEST BOTH OF YOU RE-READ YOUR SHIT THOROUGHLY BEFORE POSTING YOUR NEXT BATTLEVERSE, AND EDIT SHIT THAT DOSENT MAKE 100% SENSE..... MY VOTES IN ANYWAYS.

Krymez got this for me despite issues of his own. Nicks verse was just way too fucked up. Wording to pronunciation to wp to everything. I’m not breaking this shit down super hard as I don’t think it’s required at all. Better structure, rhyming, and less overall mistakes gave it to Kold.