y cant i accept my own battle id totally win

Vote: This has to go to Red Baron. He mostly had punchlines, with an understanding of punchlines and set-ups. However, the execution of some of these is a bit shaky, as his wordplay didn’t work two ways. He did have some solid 2-3 word multi’s. Poknn showed no clue how to write a battle verse,punchlines or multi’s. He posted a cypher verse, where he used mostly self-hype or disses (which are different from punchlines), and his flips didn’t even attempt to connect with the set-up. Poknn also identifies have multi’s, which made me detract half of the points from his verse.

Advice.

Poknn.

1: Structure your Punchlines like this “You couldn’t (insert metaphor or wordplay) even if you were a (Insert flip. By flip, I mean the punchline itself. Make it creative, but make sure it connects to the former set up.

2: Have Multi’s, they will net most of your points

3: Don’t put that self hype shit, or anything not related to attacking your opponent.

Good battle.

Ones bars and punchlines alone won him this. Fairs in fellas keep rocking n rolling