KILLERS.

KILLERS.

PUNISH shit !!!

ITS 9.30am...... I'LL VOTE ON THIS IN A BIT AS I STILL GOT MY TIRED EYES ON.

PUNISH

OK...... CECIL I REALLY LIKED THA FIRST HALF OF YOUR BAR AN HOW IT WAS WORDED, THA 2ND HALF I LIKED THA IDEA AN THA WAY YOU PRESENTED IT BUT ''SHO=SHOW'' IS SUCH AN OVERUSED NAMEPLAY, I BET HE'S HAD THAT USED ON HIM MORE THAN ANY OTHER CONCEPT, I EVEN USED IT WHEN I BATTLED HIM FIRST TIME IN THA SCHEME ABOUT A YEAR AGO, I LIKED HOW YOU USED IT THO AS ''LINES THATLL PUT SHO IN HIS PLACE'', ACTUALLY THA BAR AS A WHOLE WAS IMMACULATE AN IT FLOWED PERFECTLY, BUT I CANT GET PASSED HOW PLAYED THAT CONCEPT ACTUALLY IS.  YOU SHOWED ALOT OF LYRICAL SKILL WITH THA BAR THO SO ITS A SHAME A PLAYED CONCEPT WAS USED REALLY........... SHODAN ALSO WAS IMMACULATE WITH THA SET-UPS, FLOW AND WORDING.  THE BAR AS A WHOLE ALL CONNECTED REALLY WELL AN THA CONCEPT WAS REALLY CLEVER (without tha expo i woulda been lost), I MEAN THA ''TRACKS/TRAINS'' CONCEPT IS ALSO REALLY PLAYED, BUT THAT BEIN SAID THA ''L TRAIN=TRANSIT PASS'' ELEMENT WHICH WAS FOCUSED ON ALMOST ORIGINAILIZED THA WHOLE THING....... I GOTTA SLIGHTLY EDGE THIS ONE TO SHODAN, BUT GREAT WORK FROM BOTH HERE..... FAIR IS DROPPED.

Hmm L train and put sho in place r old ideas tbh not that that's a bad thing most things said in text have already been said it just came down to who had the better flip with that being said like Shodan's flip better 

Off the hop weird one for me. Kind of lit rn but Ima vote this on the phone. Brett Cecil you basically wrote a bar about a bar. Like you said your lines will be so good they’ll body/son Shodan. But that’s the only bar you have here. It wasn’t like an intro to a 16 where you went on to son Shodan. So I’m kinda lost like in a 1 bar can you really just have your bar be like “I’ll have better lines than you”? Evander Sholyfield, I think in a vacuum you wrote the better bar. But, I pose the same question. In a 1 bar battle, can you really have your bar be about the other dudes track making when he’s NEVER made a track? Like, talking about fucking the dudes girl or general physical threats are generic and I get that. Shit look at my 1 bar run most of it is generic but can still Be theoretically applicable if you feel me. But when you go after something specific like track making, in a 1 bar battle, and the dude doesn’t make tracks? Like its got no impact. Maybe in a 16 tucked away sure but if this is all there is to the battle, I know the sho name flip was played but honestly amigos I’m going with Cece sabathia on this one because his bar sounds like it was written for Shodan and Shodans bar doesn’t even sound like it was written for anyone, but instead for someone specific who ISNT cecil. Hope this makes sense. 

One has better depth to it I can say. That's why I would rather see a 16 or something cuz one bar would only be voted on by one bars 😂. Loser was nice to tho cool flow punch was ok. Winner just has the structure nicely put with da depth of the punch connection fv

It was a hard decision but I went for the one that instantly took my liking more. Nice battle