Toke Loc had some dope rhymes with great flow, and was aggressive throughout, but in terms of punches with double meanings he was lacking. Dragun's verse was a bit lower in terms of readability, but his concepts were more impactful, even though they weren't particularly great. Fair's in.

PUNISH

This was a respectable loss. Winner held it down with stronger punchlines, first timer did a fair job at executing his first verse

I ACTUALLY ENJOYED BOTH VERSES HERE, LOC HAS ALOT OF POTENTIAL AND WAS VERY DIRECT TOWARDS HIS OPPONANT THA WHOLE WAY THROUGH HIS VERSE.  THA THING THAT LET YOU DOWN A LIL WAS YOUR RHYMIN, ALL THA RHYMES WERE CLEAN AN THA SYLLABLES MATCHED BUT YOU NEED TO BE MORE EXPERIMENTAL COZ ''MUNCH TIME'' ''CRUNCH RHYMES'' ETC IS BASIC RHYMIN, ''SOCIOPATH'' ''HOPE THAT HE HAS'' IS MORE LIKE IT SO NEXT BATTLE TRY AN RHYME MORE LIKE THAT THROUGHOUT YOUR VERSE........ D I LIKED YOUR OPENIN LINE, MOST OF THA REST READ A LIL AWKWARDLY THO SO THA THING YOU NEED TO FOCUS ON IS YOUR WORDING, YOU HAD SOME GOOD LIL PARTS THO LIKE YOUR OPENER AND YOUR CLOSER BUT THA REST WAS A LIL HARD TO FOLLOW...... ALL IN ALL LOC's VERSE FLOWED BETTER BUT DRAGUN RHYMIN AN EXECUTIN HIS CONCEPTS WAS ON A SLIGHTLY HIGHER LEVEL..... BOTH OF YOU GOT MAD POTENTIAL THO AN DID A GOOD JOB HERE, FAIR IS DROPPED!