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Nihilism (0%)
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Reppin: Oxnard, California, United States
The Saaxxx Baba is on FIRE! 10+ wins in a row!The Saaxxx Baba is on FIRE! 10+ wins in a row!The Saaxxx Baba (100%) WINNER
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Reppin: Surat, Gujarat, India



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Battle started: May 13th 2019 at 10:21
Challenger joined: May 13th 2019 at 10:29


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2019-05-13 10:29:02).

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Kiwi Peewee
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Overall this was a decent battle, but both verses had some issues with the cleanliness of their multies and their conceptual strength. I voted for nickleshanadan because I felt his multies and punches were both at a higher level and he attacked his opponent more directly.

Nihilism you should only capitalise syllables that are directly involved in a rhyme. "All the time/physicist mind" aren't true multies for a number of reasons. Firstly, the number of syllables between them don't match. When you're writing a scheme using the same multi repeatedly, your number 1 priority should be to make sure each multi has the same number of syllables. Secondly, the actual syllables you used in this scheme didn't really rhyme beyond the final syllable. "All the/physicist" don't rhyme in any way I can conceive of. This general type of thing afflicted a lot of the multies through your verse, which really held you back here. The "attorney's answer sustained/a Bernie Sanders campaign" multies were by far your best in terms of clean rhyming and complexity. The kind of ideas you were throwing around in those final bars were also much more complex than the beginning of your verse (i.e. direct punches and use of metaphors and similes such as the Sanders campaign one were) and were more effective, try to make your bars more like these.

Nickleshanadan your multies were mostly clean, but again there were a few key flaws in them that held you back. The wording of your first multi pair seemed forced. In my experience, no-one ever says "the Everest", so it didn't sound too natural. Try to make sure what you're saying is natural to say, not just to rhyme. The second bar was worded more naturally (although still not completely natural in the first line), the "reap shame/cleavage" didn't really rhyme to me but I gave you the benefit of the doubt it was down to accents since the other syllables of the multies did rhyme. The bar as a whole might have been the botb, although you could have landed it harder if you had carried the black widow concept over both lines; whereas the first line only really set up the multi of the second line. The rest of your verse was reasonably solid, your closer was another contender for botb.

All in all a good battle, but nickleshanadan's conceptual strength and cleaner execution carried them to a win here.

Posted on: 2019-05-15 00:21:13 Private Message Kiwi Peewee

 
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The Saaxxx Baba
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Expos - 

Bras(brass)

Tit is also a small bird

Hooters means tits and nose too informally

PUNISH shit !!

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Posted on: 2019-05-13 10:31:16 Private Message The Saaxxx Baba

JayDiamondScarFace

I like the second reply verse had some stream of raps plus some holds and rhymes that he added well good battle,8-9fair vote

Voted: Nihilism / The Saaxxx Baba
Posted on: 2019-05-13 11:00:27 Private Message JayDiamondScarFace

Nihilism

Jay you arw notoriously the worst fucking voter ever

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Posted on: 2019-05-13 13:48:17 Private Message Nihilism

Ginge

nihilism has a solid grasp of punchline structure and a lot of potential based on dis fact, but his multis r non existant, capitalises a good chunk of words for 1 or 2 syllable rhymes, get the hang of multi structure and you'll be well along ur way fam

nickles, not a bad round at all, more than enough 2 win and ur closer got a chuckle outta me

Voted: Nihilism / The Saaxxx Baba
Posted on: 2019-05-13 17:59:07 Private Message Ginge

 

 
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