Congratulations to Jay for actually dissing his opponent this time. That’s actually the only reason he won. His shit might’ve not rhymed. It may have been basic. But he. Dissed. His. Opponent. Nihilism brought nothing to the table, except for one diss that was aimed at the site, and a poor one at that.

Nihilism: Multiple problems with your verse. Firstly, have multis. Multis are multi word rhymes. Anyone can rap if your just making a rap with one word rhymes. That’s why we judge by multi’s. It isn’t easy to combine rhyming phrases made up of 3 words or more, and make them have sense in the context of the setup. Which brings me to my second point. Have setups. To be honest, your shit was basic, but it has potential.

Congratulations to Jay for actually dissing his opponent this time. That’s actually the only reason he won. His shit might’ve not rhymed. It may have been basic. But he. Dissed. His. Opponent. Nihilism brought nothing to the table, except for one diss that was aimed at the site, and a poor one at that.

Nihilism: Multiple problems with your verse. Firstly, have multis. Multis are multi word rhymes. Anyone can rap if your just making a rap with one word rhymes. That’s why we judge by multi’s. It isn’t easy to combine rhyming phrases made up of 3 words or more, and make them have sense in the context of the setup. Which brings me to my second point. Have setups. To be honest, your shit was basic, but it has potential. A good set-up, follows this structure “I could call you a — from the way that ya —“ or “I could tell you’re a — from the way that ya —“. If you just say “my passion is making your squirm” there is no set-up and no context to the diss. That bar also bring me to my third point, this is a rap battle, not a a cypher. Diss your opponent, don’t use self-hype lines unless in a setup. Self hype lines are an absolute killer to verses that have non-stop punchlines. You. Will. Always. Lose. If you have any self hype lines as your punches (providing your opponent brings a decent verse.). Fourth, your metaphors make no sense. Your last line for example, how does mucinex have to do with people living in basements? What the fuck is that shit? Mucinex isn’t even a germ, it’s a medication. I’d advise you look up the best battlers on the site. Shodan, Arthur Morgan, Rai are all good battlers.

- No multi’s.

- Only. 1. Decent. Punchline. (Redbull, and even that could he improved upon.)

- Metaphors were weak af and didn’t make any sense.

- Poor execution of some half-Decent concepts.

JayDiamond: Damn. You actually used a punchline. Pretty cool. What I said in your other battles still applies though homie. Firstly, you need multi’s. Secondly, your shit didn’t rhyme. I only seen 3 lines that rhymed. Third, ditch he self hype lines. Keep em punches rolling in. Fourth, Metaphors and Wordplay are the key to victory.

+ Attempted dissing for once

- Needs RHYMES and MULTIS

- Needs Metaphors and Wordplay

- Poor execution of decent concepts.

Also an expo, just in case on of you gets upset, this isn’t a hate vote. I vote critically,frankly, and speak my mind. I don’t give a fuck about being nice. If something is shit to me. It’s shit. However my sole purpose of voting is to help people improve their game and elevate.

Yeah well every rapper doesnt use a fuck ton of multis so yea idgaf. Rap how you rap

And not every rapper is good either. Most in fact, are shitty at what they do.

One was all around better. Even though he used the same multi which hurt him he still had the better bars. One just posts bullshit he should be permanently banned