I was going to say some shit, then I saw "Florida" an that explained everything.

what does that mean 

means you probably live in south florida

naw i'm in central florida bro 

I like this text battle between twoo2 good emcees both Wright good text verses Bulletholes Bnas both are good emcees some good raps and good creativity Bnas verse rap whas a comeback and win for the win verse,fair vote good battle,4-9 Bnas winner

Bnas deciding to be Bnas makes me happy. One was clearly outclassed in every category.

Bulletholes: This was a verse with some nice concepts killed by bad wording, forced multi’s and horrible execution. Firstly, make sure that your multi’s completely rhyme syllable fo syllable, if they don’t, it’s not a multi. For example Vicious doesn’t rhyme with psycho or hoe, and psycho doesn’t rhyme with hoe because psycho has “psyche” at the beginning. It would’ve been better to make a bar along the lines of “Psyche Hoe *insert word that rhymes with Vicious*. Secondly, make sure your multi’s have the same syllable count, if not, it quite literally murders the flow. Third, make sure that your set up connects to your punches. What does medium sound (assuming you mean mediums in the supernatural tense) have to do with having stitches or being suspicious? Fourth, your wording here is really awkward, for example, what the fuck is “Somebody’s son gone be done”. Like it literally makes no sense. Fifth, a lot of your concepts can be expanded on by metaphors or wordplay, for example the “Kill Yourself” lines. Sixth, don’t have multi’s for the sake of having multi’s, have multi’s where needed and be appropriate, not a clusterfuck around the verse.

+ Improving by a margin 

+ Verse has potential

+ Good concepts

- Bad Wording

- Forced Multis

- Set ups not connecting to punches

-Broken Multi’s

Bnas: Well, looks like you wasted a damn good verse. The last line fucking killed any chance he had of winning. Your multi’s were on point too. But here is one criticism I have, and the only one I have. Blatantly doesn’t rhyme with Insanely. Other than that, your personals were great, metaphors on point, and wordplay was pretty good too. My applaud

+ Great Multis

+ Hard hitting personals

+ Metaphors on point

+ Wordplay is stellar

- Some words in some multi’s dont have a complete rhyme.

Deleted comments. Keep the swaying and shit talking off the battle. Especially between 1 guy that isn’t even in this battle. Handle your shit elsewhere.

This entire battle is just saturated with multis its like everybody is trying to be eminem even though Em fucking sucks these days. I need more punchlines